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想起白水的【如梦令】
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PostPosted: 2014-12-24 19:10:52    Post subject: 想起白水的【如梦令】 Reply with quote

当初白水的一曲【如梦令。古渡】,唱和者不下几十首,创下了最高纪录,着实火热一番,现在再想和出有新意又不重样的很难了。正值佳节,我忽然想出了几句轻松点的,算是再凑个热闹。

酒后不知归处,
满眼非烟即雾。
脚下似腾云,坠入北郊南浦。
挪步,挪步,
倒海翻江难诉。

白水的【如梦令】古渡:

向晚夕阳归处
惊散青烟红雾
挚手忆当年,无奈又别南浦
留步留步
了断梦缘难诉
祝白水兄圣诞佳节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2014-12-25 04:05:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好晓松
临屏草和,乐个

昨晚和先生到DOWNTOWN雨夜观灯, 高速弯道多,雨急路滑,先生说:再别干这种傻事.我却偷着乐,看车河灯影, 珠帘雾浓,,, ,,,

昨夜飞舟代步
误潜银河深处
灯影绽繁星, 缭绕雨帘珠幕
重渡,重渡
又见九天逐鹿



待会儿起床看能否发张照片上来,节日快乐 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2014-12-25 07:15:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松酒后挪歩,白水飞舟潛渡,
圣诞再和新词,同声相应同酷!
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PostPosted: 2014-12-25 12:38:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

【如梦令】随和凑乐

圣诞闲游几处,
忙里偷闲看雾。
北面又风光,零下二三十度。
留住,留住,
冰雪满山是路。

Dec 25, 2014 Hormish Garden of Fort McMurray (南河书院) 2:00-2:30 pm

问候晓松白水黄老师,圣诞快乐!
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PostPosted: 2014-12-25 12:54:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

南河好和,圣诞快乐!
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PostPosted: 2014-12-25 14:00:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

各位雅兴不减,我再接着回家的路上........

究竟前方何物?
看上几分恐怖。
走近定睛瞧,却是一棵枯树。
糊涂,糊涂,
像是老天捉弄。 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2014-12-25 18:09:46    Post subject: 祝朋友们圣诞快乐 Reply with quote

2014圣诞,摄于央街雨夜

逐鹿

雨幕
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PostPosted: 2014-12-25 18:38:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
各位雅兴不减,我再接着回家的路上........

究竟前方何物?
看上几分恐怖。
走近定睛瞧,却是一棵枯树。
糊涂,糊涂,
像是老天捉弄。
...

够晕 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2014-12-25 21:58:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
当初白水的一曲【如梦令。古渡】,唱和者不下几十首,创下了最高纪录,着实火热一番,现在再想和出有新意又不重样的很难了。正值佳节,我忽然想出了几句轻松点的,算是再凑个热闹。

酒后不知归处,
满眼非烟即雾。
脚下似腾云,坠入北郊南浦。
挪步,挪步,
倒海翻江难诉。

白水的【如梦令】古渡:

向晚夕阳归处
惊散青烟红雾
挚手忆当年,无奈重逢南浦
留步留步
了断痴情难诉

...

佳节又临神悟,
满眼诗词歌赋。
清似水玲珑,
醉似涧中松语。
留步,留步,
今夜怎能归去! Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2014-12-26 03:51:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

如梦令 回顾

诗友年年回顾,
感悟写成七律。
句句话艰辛,
倾诉移民甘苦。
长路,长路,
深浅几多脚步。

(诗友秋叶兄年年写《七律 回望》)
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PostPosted: 2014-12-28 11:28:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

qinghongh wrote:
如梦令 回顾
...


谢谢庆宏兄提醒,今年将要回望了。 昨晚大家欢聚,依韵草上一首以记:

如梦令 欢聚

圣诞余灯闪处,
诗友举杯欢度。
引颈随高歌,白水盛装舞步。
休住, 休住,
微信传输神速。

昨天的聚会,我现场把录像用微信传给六楼旧主同欢。
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PostPosted: 2014-12-28 20:52:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

圣诞刚过,做了一次加东三日游,到蒙特利尔、魁北克,体会了一把法国风情: 法式建筑,法式大餐,教堂,圣母院,购物街等等,但印象最深的还是平生第一次坐上狗拉雪橇。多伦多没雪,魁北克有雪。

雪上起伏小道,
穿越林中环绕。
栓狗五三只,一路狂奔乱跳。
甚妙,甚妙,
把舵尤为重要。

雪橇一次两个人,一人前面坐着,一人后面站着掌舵。游人兴致勃勃,狗似乎对生人不大情愿,只顾奔跑,不管你后面怎样。这时雪橇后面掌舵的就显得重要了,特别在拐弯时要及时减速并调整方向,否则很容易被撞到树上。
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PostPosted: 2014-12-28 20:58:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

秋叶 wrote:
如梦令 欢聚

圣诞余灯闪处,
诗友举杯欢度。
引颈随高歌,白水盛装舞步。
休住, 休住,
微信传输神速。

昨天的聚会,我现场把录像用微信传给六楼旧主同欢。


有得有失,这次聚会没赶上~
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PostPosted: 2014-12-29 05:44:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

推荐大家一个好去处,离我家仅20封钟车程。昨晚我们全家出动。


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PostPosted: 2014-12-29 06:15:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

的确是好去处,不知能持续几天?
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PostPosted: 2014-12-29 06:20:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

年前应该没问题,你查一下51网
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PostPosted: 2014-12-29 07:01:29    Post subject: 临屏一乐,记诗友圣诞小聚 Reply with quote

临屏一乐,记诗友2014圣诞小聚

方雪张文万沐
秋叶百鸣词赋
黄老庆宏,可见艳华歌舞?
如故,如故
白水冰清遥祝



灯夜巍拔迷路,南河小住
惊现靓妹妹,疑是开二度
糊涂,糊涂
大卫忙扶眼镜 Very Happy Very Happy

1)那日因晚间聚会,没敢请冰清和黄老师来。前段日子联系连南河,听说在外阜工作,这次也未能聚。甚感遗憾。
2)此两小令因嵌名一乐(红字为诗友名,黄老指黄老师),略有不合词牌处,见谅
3)巍拔迟到,小记一笔
4)我先生愣把万牧夫人看成他的女儿,晕死Very Happy Very Happy


以李存勗《如梦令·曾宴桃源深洞》为正体:

中仄中平平仄,中仄中平平仄。

曾宴桃源深洞,一曲舞鸾歌凤。

中仄仄平平,中仄仄平平仄。

长记别伊时,和泪出门相送。

平仄,〖平仄〗,中仄仄平平仄。

如梦,如梦,残月落花烟重。
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