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[原创投稿]一头巨鲸在绿海中畅游
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PostPosted: 2007-04-30 23:16:11    Post subject: [原创投稿]一头巨鲸在绿海中畅游 Reply with quote

一头巨鲸在绿海中畅游

田 斌

蒙古偌大的草原
绿浪汹涌起澎湃的海洋
劲风吹拂的海面上
没有船 也没有帆
只有撒落的蒙古包
阳光下 像雨后新鲜的蘑菇
星星点点
一列火车
一头巨大的鲸
它跃动的身姿
带动了草原
车身风影
打破了草原的宁静
它畅游海洋的极速景致
无以言说
像天空无云的晴朗
透出蓝





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PostPosted: 2007-05-01 05:35:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

还可以压压.节日快乐!
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PostPosted: 2007-05-03 04:11:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

可提炼些。
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