影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2014-12-12 03:36:02 Post subject: 七律•亦作“只把相思付玉钩” |
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七律•亦作“只把相思付玉钩”
野渡无人舟应休,轻横慢落载闲愁。
丛葭浮白诚邀月,霜菊摇黄欲挽秋。
雁去回乡衔尺素,风来持盏上亭楼。
满山红叶多情主,谨把相思付玉钩。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2014-12-12 08:45:18 Post subject: |
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“丛葭浮白诚邀月,霜菊摇黄欲挽秋”,好联!
“邀”,“挽”二动词用得生动传神。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2014-12-12 10:10:23 Post subject: |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2014-12-13 02:40:12 Post subject: |
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谢谢朋友们阅读!
周末快乐! _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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