qinghongh
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 Posted: 2014-11-03 08:58:42 Post subject: 步韵紫陌香雪《生日临近》 |
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七律 步韵紫陌香雪《生日临近》
岁月悠悠逐水流，诗情画意也曾收。
青春年少青春梦，不惑生辰不惑秋。
云卷云舒添美景，花开花落映西楼。
未封李广功仍在，无意冯唐黑白头。
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七律 生日临近
紫陌香雪
雪意橫空雲不流，年來風味几曾收。
漫天黃葉三千里，過隙光陰四十秋。
舒卷情懷且加飯，去留往事莫登樓。
当年書读前朝事，曾笑馮唐易白头。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2014-11-03 13:20:11 Post subject: |
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唱和俱佳，祝紫陌香雪生日快乐！
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2014-11-03 13:33:38 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
| 唱和俱佳，祝紫陌香雪生日快乐！ |
谢谢黄老师雅赏！ |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2014-11-10 06:54:23 Post subject: |
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抒怀佳作；真情唱和。
 颔联“叠”得真好！ |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2014-11-10 08:34:49 Post subject: |
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| 冰清 wrote: |
抒怀佳作；真情唱和。
颔联“叠”得真好！ |
谢谢冰清老师雅赏! |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2014-12-29 20:32:11 Post subject: |
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| “青春年少青春梦，不惑生辰不惑秋。云卷云舒添美景，花开花落映西楼。 ” 好句欣赏！ |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2014-12-30 08:32:59 Post subject: |
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| 晓松 wrote: |
| “青春年少青春梦，不惑生辰不惑秋。云卷云舒添美景，花开花落映西楼。 ” 好句欣赏！ |
谢谢晓松雅赏！祝晓松及诗友们新婚快乐！ |
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