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刘海澄
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PostPosted: 2007-05-02 15:44:35    Post subject: 为了许诺 Reply with quote
为了许诺


把心弦奏响 让弦韵
穿过黑夜和迷雾
不惜被剐掉优美的音符
甚至遭受夜莺的嘲讽

让鲜血和热泪
洒在长满荆莽的荒径
幻成顾盼的红花
只要它闪亮你的眼睛

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PostPosted: 2007-05-02 17:05:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
只要它闪亮你的眼睛

很经典
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PostPosted: 2007-05-03 04:08:52    Post subject: Reply with quote
不惜被剐掉优美的音符
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刘海澄
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PostPosted: 2007-05-03 06:12:37    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢两位的点评，又让我有悟
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PostPosted: 2007-05-04 10:34:20    Post subject: Reply with quote
回味.为了许诺
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PostPosted: 2007-05-04 20:02:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
读。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-05 14:12:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
再谢各位评点。
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PostPosted: 2007-07-06 14:36:29    Post subject: Reply with quote
让鲜血和热泪
洒在长满荆莽的荒径
幻成顾盼的红花
只要它闪亮你的眼睛

为了许诺
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PostPosted: 2007-07-06 20:49:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
期待更多佳作：）问好，夏天快乐好心情！
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