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七绝.有记

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-04-03 08:52:42 Post subject: 七绝.有记

放逐天涯事未休，见君无语泪先流。三年一梦缘非浅，只说相思不说愁。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-04-03 09:37:40 Post subject:

只说相思不说愁感动中 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-04-03 18:26:07 Post subject:

含蓄流畅。学习！

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Posted: 2007-04-06 22:37:15 Post subject:

有情味

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Posted: 2007-04-09 03:48:31 Post subject:

只说相思不说愁。 _________________ 观静水之深沉，品智者之无声

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Posted: 2007-04-22 07:20:51 Post subject:

舒缓有致, 诚挚感人。

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-04-22 07:38:47 Post subject:

感谢各位老师评阅。暗香问好。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-04-23 22:50:57 Post subject:

好一个“三年一梦缘非浅，只说相思不说愁。”此诗非常的好！！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-04-24 04:07:07 Post subject:

谢谢杨老师的评阅．还请多光临古韵．问好． _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-04-24 17:18:59 Post subject:

放逐天涯事未休，见君无语泪先流。三年一梦缘非浅，只说相思不说愁。甚美!不似古人,胜似古人

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-05-02 00:55:01 Post subject:

感谢评阅。节日快乐 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-05-02 01:14:43 Post subject:

放逐天涯事未休，见君无语泪先流。三年一梦缘非浅，只说相思不说愁。呵呵，随上一首：休言放逐到异邦，白山绿水空彷徨念到苦时方飞悟，天下无不是我乡 _________________ 心灵之旅： http://www.samecityinfo.com/supersite/?23

暗香如沁
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Posted: 2007-05-02 01:17:06 Post subject:

和的好快。暗香心胸远不如兄长。兄长是天涯处处是我家。好惬意。洒脱。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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Posted: 2007-05-02 01:20:53 Post subject:

呵呵，冒昧了。诗兄的诗挺不错的，只是愁了点儿，所以，就瞎跟了跟。

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Posted: 2007-05-03 06:38:44 Post subject:

没有瞎跟了。至少让暗香又明白些事物。很好。节日快乐。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/axrq用寂寞谱写最美的舞曲~

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