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PostPosted: 2007-04-24 08:35:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
七绝-凌波仙子

含苞深阁隐娇羞, 雅韵闲情异样柔
玉指寒冬拈瑞雪, 凌波吐蕊笑春秋

格律工整,描寫貼切。首尾兩句最好,由含苞到開花,把蓮花姿態說的活靈活現。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-05-01 18:02:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清,戴玨. 谢谢鼓励. 自幼喜欢荷花的清淡, 叶儿顶在头上能当伞, 系腰间就是裙了,最喜欢是吃那莲蓬米, 到北美没得吃了, 偶尔写写荷, 算个念想吧, 问好 Razz
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PostPosted: 2007-05-02 00:34:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

好!

初荷

“凌波仙子俏梳妆”

盛荷

“万花竞绽晚霞浓”

残荷

“断藕抽丝倾尽愁”

倦荷

“红尘参破匿天涯”


人的一生,若是这样,结束也是一件美丽的事了。





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PostPosted: 2007-05-02 01:05:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

烈日的画也很有味的,引出诗一首:

《荷蓬》

淡染荷蓬花亦红
轻轻跃出塘泥丛
飞来两只知意鸟
伴我独自墨色浓
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PostPosted: 2007-05-02 01:11:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

厉害!!!先顶上。回头慢慢欣赏学习。
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PostPosted: 2007-05-10 05:28:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

墨客好诗. 我把图贴过来了 Very Happy

枫华墨客 wrote:
烈日的画也很有味的,引出诗一首:

《荷蓬》

淡染荷蓬花亦红
轻轻跃出塘泥丛
飞来两只知意鸟
伴我独自墨色浓


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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-05-10 05:35:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢各位, 先贴首旧作吧

依韵和清风

深情自古醉中秋, 冷月清韵万古流
玉兔哭红相聚梦, 婵娟泪洒异乡愁

清风原玉: 也次韵和:


清风长吻荷花羞, 绿瓣平添少女柔。
皓月从来萦旧梦, 深情自古醉中秋。




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白水
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PostPosted: 2007-07-09 15:12:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

七律 冬荷

皓月浮云冷梦中,
凋零满目泣芙蓉.
珠凝滑落娇无力,
茎断尤撑骨傲风.
莲子悄藏芯内苦,
叶残坦对世间恭.
涸塘素裹寒冬雪,
不亚清波映日红.
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黄洋界
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PostPosted: 2007-07-09 17:19:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

我亦爱莲尘不染,竟和白水意相同.欣赏您的多首咏荷之作.
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PostPosted: 2007-07-09 18:18:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢老师鼓励
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PostPosted: 2007-07-10 08:03:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水描写道:"叶儿顶在头上,当伞,系腰间的就是裙了,最喜欢吃的是那莲蓬米",好!一段微型散文,生动地描绘了童年的欢乐.因成五绝二首,以博一粲.
五绝二首 荷塘二首
荷塘柳荫下, 四五小儿童,
口咬莲蓬米, 荷叶当雨篷.



妞妞饶有趣, 叶片 做花裙,
小手轻轻舞, 娉婷似彩云.
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PostPosted: 2007-07-10 16:33:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢黄老师, 好一幅稚子戏荷图. 真把我们引向那纯真的童年
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PostPosted: 2012-10-21 08:23:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

七绝〈逝〉

秋来漫步度荷乡,白框红叉雪满塘
美景不知何处去,曲终图逝两茫茫

好多漂亮的图片,音乐都不见了, 好遗憾

Sad Very Happy Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2012-10-22 06:46:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

贴一首旧作和白水《逝》

叶老已蛩知,枫红写满丝。深秋天做主,晨露地吟诗。
霜辱投怀早,花黄入目迟。哀哀荷未死,芯苦喜由之。
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PostPosted: 2012-10-22 09:25:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢笑聊的诗歌, 读罢竟有点凄凄。
深秋写荷易伤感,改天我想想再和,看能否写首带笑的。问好重阳节 Very Happy
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