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《时尚之雨》
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PostPosted: 2014-08-08 20:12:26    Post subject: 《时尚之雨》 Reply with quote

下雨
这两天都有

去超市买点吃的喝的
去农村抓只鸡回来
去书店淘本书来看
去大街上寻些丢失的人

坐在家里或者
酒吧,也或者
就在雨里,只要
你愿意
我给你操
得有水准

鸡在窝里下蛋
鸭子蹲在小巷里抽烟

互相勒索
寂寞
等雨来酿酒
等你来操

泥巴镶嵌在纽扣
衣服绣出完美的花边
那是时尚
爱情比昙花
略长

安余城
2014.8.9
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PostPosted: 2014-08-09 06:24:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

泥巴镶嵌在纽扣
衣服绣出完美的花边

很美
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PostPosted: 2014-08-09 15:01:28    Post subject: 谢谢老师,祝快乐呦 Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
泥巴镶嵌在纽扣
衣服绣出完美的花边

很美

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PostPosted: 2014-08-11 18:00:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

那种淡淡的松弛很好,不知尾句如何理解?
——等雨来酿酒
等你来操
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