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七古•挑灯不复少年姿

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Posted: 2014-07-17 02:30:52 Post subject: 七古•挑灯不复少年姿

七古•挑灯不复少年姿梦如青山常乱叠，人在红尘剩相思。观云以沫沉天际，还掬逝水向兰芝。芳香散淡鸡窗里，挑灯不复少年姿。为文欢喜灵魂现，抽刀长叹寄小诗。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2014-07-21 12:10:39 Post subject:

诗中佳句叠出，尤喜“挑燈不负少年姿”，“抽刀长叹寄小诗”句，寒水兄炼字煉句上下了大功夫！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2014-07-22 02:22:33 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

诗中佳句叠出，尤喜“挑燈不负少年姿”，“抽刀长叹寄小诗”句，
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