影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2014-06-05 03:16:59 Post subject: 七律•两极分化(新韵) |
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七律•两极分化(新韵)
可怜漏里泥沙下,何避红尘败世风?
有志青年多晦养,无肠公子遍横行。
香车美女群夸耀,清水蜗居路远征。
独向灵台千万里,两极分化不聊生。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2014-06-05 07:37:53 Post subject: |
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伤时刺世,寒水忧心。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2014-06-05 12:47:11 Post subject: |
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警世之言 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2014-06-06 18:49:00 Post subject: |
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最喜颔联、颈联! |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2014-06-07 03:31:57 Post subject: |
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问好朋友们 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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