qinghongh
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七律 雁归春回
大雁归惊物候新，水清草绿雪无痕。
云舒云卷皆为景，花落花开又到春。
羁旅天涯桑梓远，寄情银屏故乡亲。
如烟往事几回首，可向青春觅率真？
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宠辱不惊，闲看庭前花开花落；
去留无意，漫随天外云卷云舒。
明，洪应明《菜根谭》
～～～～～～～～～～
《和晋陵陆丞相早春游望》
唐，杜审言
独有宦游人，偏惊物候新。
云霞出海曙，梅柳渡江春。
淑气催黄鸟，晴光转绿苹。
忽闻歌古调，归思欲沾襟。 |
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黄洋界
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2014-05-07 17:02:56 Post subject: |
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起句清新，中间二联不仅工稳，且富深情，结句亦佳。好律！
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2014-05-07 17:16:13 Post subject: |
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| 黄洋界 wrote: |
| 起句清新，中间二联不仅工稳，且富深情，结句亦佳。好律！ |
谢谢黄老师鼓励！ |
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Daxia
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Joined: 26 Apr 2013
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Location: Mississauga, Canada
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| Posted: 2014-05-13 08:31:06 Post subject: |
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庆宏兄，好律！学习了。
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2014-05-13 12:35:13 Post subject: |
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谢谢晓鸣兄雅赏！ |
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笑聊
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Joined: 05 Jan 2010
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Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2014-05-16 22:45:51 Post subject: |
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| 学习佳作！问候。 |
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2014-05-17 02:05:16 Post subject: |
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谢谢笑聊兄雅赏！问好！ |
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