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關於詩題是一個句子的提問
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PostPosted: 2014-05-01 06:06:54    Post subject: 關於詩題是一個句子的提問 Reply with quote

關於詩題是一個句子的提問

網上挂著一些蟲
有的已死
有的風乾了
有的還在掙扎

蜘蛛回來了
整理家園
它又抽出一根新絲
把物件給連接起來
這根絲,有時看著像夜裏的霓虹燈
有時聽著像一陣風死蟲子飄起來
有時聞著巷弄烟酒闌珊味
有時硬的,像根繩子

它不肯吃,不忍吃
怕咀嚼時蟲已變味
便又把絲弄斷
全部放生

(今日即筆)
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PostPosted: 2014-05-01 06:21:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

再即百年老店

店還是那個店
招牌上曾經隸書
曾經楷書
曾經霓虹
今天挂的既有中文又有英文
管它的--
但不知店裏賣的味道變了沒
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PostPosted: 2014-05-01 22:08:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

新颖的想象。
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PostPosted: 2014-05-02 06:47:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

物件是客觀,絲是主觀是謂語形容詞副詞等。
有些絲看得見,有些看不見。
脫掉物件的絲,祗剩下絲,也是一個客觀。

百姓是客觀,樓宇是客觀,營生是客觀,社會滿是物件,
法律是絲;但絲也可以是情與理。
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