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【诗情画意】 水漾晨曦 古巴行题照诗词 (之一)1[2]  Next
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PostPosted: 2014-02-21 06:51:18    Post subject: 【诗情画意】 水漾晨曦 古巴行题照诗词 (之一) Reply with quote

水漾晨曦 古巴行题照诗词 之一



(一)

啼鸟殷勤慕凤晨,清歌吟醉水边春。蚩蚩海若风烟净,冉冉曦和蓬梗亲。
太极多情匀大化,凡间无俗喜贞仁。天鸡莫说桃都巧,应是高枝早出尘。




(二)

何处最销魂?春融叶气浑。心师长有约,天地一西昆。




(三)

海阔晴光远水连,波翻犹动是心弦。闲来小坐轻轻语,说与桑思一脉牵。



(女婿欢欢摄的这云层像一群跑马,让我想起了网上看到的下面这张图片。于是有词。)




(四)满庭芳•荡荡襟期

不用娇羞,也非藏匿。悠悠天路登跻。穿云破雾,一笑也舒眉。几度阶亭信马。思大化、不息连蹄。周流巧。四时本色,荡荡是襟期。
坤灵还有咏。苍瀛波远,碧琐离离。漫天然,丹铅褪尽熙怡,莹玉冰肌素静。更相惜、融与华滋。且同乐,流光驿驿,深渺也泥泥。




(五)

玉楼春•漾水琉璃

春色融和熙洽晟,漾水琉璃明似镜。柔沙行岸送轻盈,更有清音常伴听。
人似征航期昼永,过眼烟云谁卧定?晨风作意胀风帆,天上人间看梦醒。




(六)

曦光一抹淡疏星,晓月端原有性情。待到人声喧沸了,悄然归去伴空明。




(七)

鹧鸪天•了化工

谁谁宠紫又娇红,一头伸向玉楼东。没人召引怡然乐,只是亲和了化工。
情似水,水如虹。胸怀卓落两由衷。殷殷盛意焉知见,尽在清风一揽中。
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PostPosted: 2014-02-21 10:00:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

水漾晨曦如画,古巴别样风情。
欣赏冰清独特感受的大作。
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PostPosted: 2014-02-21 10:25:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜见冰清老师古巴行,海阔天空,诗情荡漾。
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PostPosted: 2014-02-22 16:31:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

拜读冰清老师大作一组,恍如亦游一般!
何处最销魂?清歌吟醉水边春。穿云破雾,应是高枝早出尘。(借用老师佳句)
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PostPosted: 2014-02-24 08:09:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清老师大作写古巴甚妙,拜读了。 我不久前也去了古巴, 想写一游记一直没有时间,迟一些再说吧。
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PostPosted: 2014-02-26 04:15:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢朋友们鼓励!

Laughing Laughing 欢欢(女婿)摄的这些照片,我舍不得割爱啊!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-26 08:12:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

再次欣赏冰清大作和令婿摄影佳作,诗作和摄影相得益彰,
让人大饱眼福,大受感染。欣赏!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-27 22:17:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

问候冰清老师!
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PostPosted: 2014-03-02 09:48:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰清老师这组诗,倾注了一腔热情,佳句令人目不暇接:
“啼鸟殷勤慕凤晨,清歌吟醉水边春”,啼鸟殷勤,清歌吟醉,也让人心醉。
“何处最销魂?春融叶气浑”,叶气融入春天,浑然一体,令人销魂。
“海阔晴光远水连,波翻犹动是心弦”,水天相连,动人心弦,其景又好似'春江潮水连海平“。
“曦光一抹淡疏星,晓月端原有性情”,难得一见的晓月,殷勤来探看。
“谁谁宠紫又娇红”,“情似水,水如虹”,美不胜收。
以上只是古巴行之一,后面还有精彩的,期待中。
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PostPosted: 2014-03-10 17:10:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄洋界 wrote:
再次欣赏冰清大作和令婿摄影佳作,诗作和摄影相得益彰,
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谢黄兄再阅!
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PostPosted: 2014-03-10 17:11:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

冷雨 wrote:
问候冰清老师!

谢谢!问候春安!
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PostPosted: 2014-03-10 17:19:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
冰清老师这组诗,倾注了一腔热情,佳句令人目不暇接:
...

晓松,谢谢鼓励。深谢你一如既往的倾注了这一腔热情。

今天上来拟发《古巴行之二之三》。可《之一》的景片不翼而飞了。那次,我也算费了九牛二虎之力的啊! Rolling Eyes Crying or Very sad
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PostPosted: 2014-04-06 15:16:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

景美 情美 诗美

情似水 水如虹 尽在清风一揽中



春天的问候与祝福!
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PostPosted: 2014-04-11 22:37:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

再来欣赏!问候冰清老师!

由于好长时间进不来,故没有及时回复,见谅。
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PostPosted: 2014-04-12 04:50:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

彩云骏马腾空,真是栩栩如生。
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PostPosted: 2014-04-17 11:12:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

如何去古巴?
路綫如何?

我一直想去古巴。
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PostPosted: 2014-04-18 12:54:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢连南河、笑聊、庆弘君的鼓励。

真心诚意地欢迎批评指正 Laughing
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PostPosted: 2014-04-18 13:16:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
如何去古巴?
路綫如何?

我一直想去古巴。

我和女儿家人一行5人曾于2013年3月和12月去古巴varadero和Holguin。
比比这两处,varadero半岛更美更好。
varadero半岛是古巴最著名的热带风情旅游胜地,有长达20公里的海滨沙滩(海水平均温度约25℃),是世界十大最美沙滩之一;沙滩一侧,分布着大大小小几十家旅游度假宾馆供你选择。一般来说,宾馆的环境、设施、饮食和有关服务都不错。另,半岛沿途风光旖旎,度假村之间设有双层游览巴士往返穿梭,要是你想去兜个圈,那也是很方便的。
此外,varadero与哈瓦那相距仅140公里。你若想去,可与旅游公司联系,花上一天时间,自费去古巴首都看看…
哈哈,那可真是百闻不如一见!

我们从加拿大去很方便。坐飞机三个多小时就到了。
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PostPosted: 2014-04-18 14:05:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

翘首以盼冰清古巴行的更多诗作在此发表,供大家欣赏学习。
问周末好!
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黄洋界 wrote:
翘首以盼冰清古巴行的更多诗作在此发表,供大家欣赏学习。
问周末好!

谢黄兄厚爱!问候。
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