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姚阳辉
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PostPosted: 2014-04-02 00:11:43    Post subject: 相约春天 Reply with quote

你来到春天
我正在一层一层剥下笋壳
剥下羞涩的潮红
剥下心跳
剥下呼吸
你瞪大眼睛看着我
灼热的目光快要溶化整个冬天
突然,你用力捉住我的双手
喃喃地说:不能再剥了
再剥
就只剩下忐忑的青春了
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PostPosted: 2014-04-05 23:31:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

表现手法新颖,有意境,有感染力,感觉很美的,欣赏,学习,问好.
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