连南河 秀才
Joined: 30 Aug 2008 Posts: 342 Location: Toronto 连南河Collection |
Posted: 2014-04-05 06:06:33 Post subject: 【声声慢】祈祷马航MH370 |
|
|
【声声慢】祈祷马航MH370
云端拭泪 似雾谜团 揪心沁入人怀 数十飞机船舰 巨浪生哀
无尽海天挂虑 月朦朦 日罩阴霾 笼罩在 水光波涛里 祈祷归来
二百三十九个 生灵与 家庭从此分开? 印度洋中灾难 苦痛谁猜?
黑匣又疑海下 六千多 米处深呆? 爱与恨 让凡间沉默 更问残骸?
【声声慢】双调九十九字,前段九句四平韵,后段八句四平韵
⊙⊙⊙◎ ◎◎⊙⊙ ⊙⊙◎●○○ ●⊙○◎○● ●●○○
⊙⊙◎○◎● ●⊙○ ⊙●○○ ●●● ●○○○● ⊙●○○
⊙◎⊙○◎● ◎◎◎ ○⊙◎●○○ ●●⊙○○● ●●○○
⊙⊙◎○●● ●○○ ⊙●○○ ●○● ●○○○● ●●○○
【平仄韵注】词林正韵,○平●仄,◎应仄可平,⊙应平可仄。
April 4, 2013 Hormish Garden of Toronto(南河书院)4:00 - 6:00 pm _________________ 一路雨丝一路风 |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
 |
 |
黄洋界 探花

Joined: 23 Mar 2007 Posts: 3301 Location: 多伦多,加拿大 黄洋界Collection |
Posted: 2014-04-05 15:45:17 Post subject: |
|
|
“云端拭泪”,“巨浪生哀”
哀哉罹难,苦痛谁猜”!
连君哀挽,众人悲催。 _________________ ++++++++++++++
喜金石书画,友竹菊梅兰 |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
 |
 |
qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2014-04-05 16:32:04 Post subject: |
|
|
情真意切 |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
 |
 |
冷雨 秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010 Posts: 439
冷雨Collection |
Posted: 2014-04-06 04:53:31 Post subject: |
|
|
问好南河老师! |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
 |
 |
笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2014-04-11 22:19:21 Post subject: |
|
|
问好连兄!由于好长时间上不来,故迟复了。望见谅! |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
 |
 |
|