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【声声慢】祈祷马航MH370  
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PostPosted: 2014-04-05 06:06:33    Post subject: 【声声慢】祈祷马航MH370   Reply with quote

【声声慢】祈祷马航MH370  

云端拭泪 似雾谜团 揪心沁入人怀 数十飞机船舰 巨浪生哀
无尽海天挂虑 月朦朦 日罩阴霾 笼罩在 水光波涛里 祈祷归来

二百三十九个 生灵与 家庭从此分开? 印度洋中灾难 苦痛谁猜?
黑匣又疑海下 六千多 米处深呆? 爱与恨 让凡间沉默 更问残骸?

【声声慢】双调九十九字,前段九句四平韵,后段八句四平韵

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【平仄韵注】词林正韵,○平●仄,◎应仄可平,⊙应平可仄。

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PostPosted: 2014-04-05 15:45:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

“云端拭泪”,“巨浪生哀”
哀哉罹难,苦痛谁猜”!
连君哀挽,众人悲催。
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PostPosted: 2014-04-05 16:32:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: 2014-04-06 04:53:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好南河老师!
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PostPosted: 2014-04-11 22:19:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好连兄!由于好长时间上不来,故迟复了。望见谅!
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