gnis
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 Posted: 2014-04-01 17:51:49 Post subject: 一 朵 玫 瑰 |
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一朵红红的玫瑰从清晨嫣然醒来，
我从篱墙外赏心悦耳地观望，
乐土秉性欢舞新叶低徊，
温煦磬馨飘香含苞欲放，
叶柄带刺摇曳争妍花儿迎人，
一滴甘露溢美柔弱心儿陶醉，
我摘下这朵玫瑰献给可爱的姑娘。
一朵红红的玫瑰从傍晚芬芳入睡，
我从花坛上静心守候地斯望，
云锦花荫枝叶双双剪影，
月华花俏枝头摇摇欲仙，
一朵美丽的玫瑰：“哪怕爱神吻别后升上天庭,
哪怕美神怜惜时幽冥同葬。”
一缕烛光抚恤脆弱眼神闪耀，
我摘下这朵玫瑰想念亲爱的恋人！
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chenrunmin
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| Posted: 2014-04-05 23:31:57 Post subject: |
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一缕烛光抚恤脆弱眼神闪耀，
我摘下这朵玫瑰想念亲爱的恋人！
祝马年快乐幸福。首复，问好。
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William Zhou周道模
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| Posted: 2014-04-09 04:13:18 Post subject: |
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传统的描写和抒情。
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诗歌是灵魂的歌唱.
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gnis
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| Posted: 2014-04-10 01:46:04 Post subject: 一朵玫瑰 |
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| 多谢指教！ |
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gnis
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| Posted: 2014-04-18 19:12:29 Post subject: |
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为爱不尽敞开着心灵织集生命亮点，有了爱情才能为人类传递智慧的火花……
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苦海
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| Posted: 2014-04-20 19:05:25 Post subject: |
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| 赏读。问好。 |
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gnis
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| Posted: 2014-04-24 21:34:10 Post subject: |
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gnis
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| Posted: 2014-05-13 21:20:09 Post subject: |
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| William Zhou周道模 wrote: |
| 传统的描写和抒情。 |
传统的描写和抒情。
谢谢！ |
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