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集句寒尽春生

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-03-17 16:24:19 Post subject: 集句寒尽春生

集句寒尽春生细柳拂头穿野径（陆游）苦寒无赖破春妍（苏轼）白头长与青山对（元.虞集）一听笙歌一慨然（元.陈基） 0 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

晓松
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Posted: 2014-03-26 18:28:41 Post subject:

集句也不容易，要想天衣无缝更难。纵观这四句，基本连贯，后两句扣主题，略显不够紧凑。吾之一家拙见。问候黄老兄！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-03-27 06:46:45 Post subject:

谢晓松评阅。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
同进士出身

Joined: 29 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2014-03-28 19:03:57 Post subject:

与晓松同感！细柳拂头穿野径（陆游）苦寒无赖破春妍（苏轼）这两句集的精妙！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-03-29 11:38:13 Post subject:

谢冰清雅评。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2014-03-30 09:27:59 Post subject:

白头青山，笙歌慨然。黄老师的集句诗作读来感慨良多啊。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-03-30 12:12:04 Post subject:

谢庆宏赏阅，白头搔更短，笙歌一慨然！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

Daxia
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Posted: 2014-04-02 13:52:59 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

集句寒尽春生
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高手。
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Daxia

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-04-02 16:23:57 Post subject:

Daxia过奖，问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

连南河
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Location: Toronto
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Posted: 2014-04-05 06:43:08 Post subject:

白头搔更短，笙歌一慨然！春天的问候与祝福！ _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-04-05 14:45:18 Post subject:

南河水暖，春意盎然，问候！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

笑聊
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Posted: 2014-04-11 22:23:34 Post subject:

问候黄老！佳作拜读，欣赏！由于很长时间进不去北美枫，故迟至今日才获得新密码得以进来聆听师友教诲。

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-04-13 06:50:06 Post subject:

谢谢笑聊赏阅和问候。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冷雨
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Posted: 2014-05-07 04:16:08 Post subject:

问候黄老！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-05-07 11:48:00 Post subject:

谢谢冷雨，问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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