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【我的原创】秋赋

东方朔南（禾玄）
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Posted: 2014-03-28 16:33:01 Post subject: 【我的原创】秋赋

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东方朔南（禾玄）
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Joined: 26 Mar 2014
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Location: 中国。沈阳
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Posted: 2014-03-28 17:13:43 Post subject:

小诗献丑，欢迎点评！谢谢光顾者！

钱晓强
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Posted: 2014-03-29 23:07:43 Post subject:

有些凝滞。应该流动。 _________________ 钱晓强的脑子http://blog.sina.com.cn/qxq2

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