冷雨
秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010
Posts: 439
冷雨Collection |
 Posted: 2014-02-25 20:42:43 Post subject: 春词【六律】 |
 |
|
雪净溪潺野知，风盈雨落春时。
鸳嬉绿水河畔，鹭漾清波岸池。
叟牧歌飞浅草，童笛曲畅疏枝。
舟浮远景晨渡，絮影篱烟暮迟 |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
|
|
冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
| Posted: 2014-02-26 04:07:26 Post subject: |
|
|
| 一派盎然生机；朗朗上口，也入耳动心！赏读。问候！ |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
黄洋界Collection |
| Posted: 2014-02-26 08:37:42 Post subject: |
|
|
写了六绝，繼写六律，得组词连缀之巧，写景抒情之妙。
_________________
++++++++++++++
喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
| Posted: 2014-02-26 10:58:40 Post subject: |
|
|
| 欣赏！ |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
冷雨
秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010
Posts: 439
冷雨Collection |
| Posted: 2014-02-27 22:15:14 Post subject: |
|
|
| 问候各位老师！ |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
| Posted: 2014-03-02 10:01:06 Post subject: |
|
|
| 冷雨 wrote: |
雪净溪潺野知，风盈雨落春时。
鸳嬉绿水河畔，鹭漾清波岸池。
叟牧歌飞浅草，童笛曲畅疏枝。
舟浮远景晨渡，絮影篱烟暮迟
|
无“枯藤老树昏鸦”的凄楚，有“小桥流水人家”的风韵。欣赏。 |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
冷雨
秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010
Posts: 439
冷雨Collection |
| Posted: 2014-04-06 04:41:54 Post subject: |
|
|
| 问好老师！“鸳鸯“是连绵词可摘开用吗！ |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
笑聊Collection |
| Posted: 2014-04-11 22:34:21 Post subject: |
|
|
| 欣赏！ |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
|
|
FAQ
Search
Memberlist
Usergroups
Register
Profile
Log in to check your private messages
Sign in
Album
