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母亲的手
陇上雪
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Joined: 01 Mar 2013
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Location: 中国甘肃
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PostPosted: 2014-02-27 17:45:07    Post subject: 母亲的手 Reply with quote

何小龙

曾经多么有力
拉架子车,抑或割麦
满手的老茧,不曾向艰辛妥协
现在,它却抖得厉害
连一双筷子都拿不住
还需靠父亲或我的帮助
才能将一勺饭菜送进嘴里

曾经多么柔软,抚摸我的脸蛋和头发
温热、舒适,如今它变得黝黑、皱巴
有次看病我搀她上楼
每上一层台阶,她都要停下喘息一会
而我握住她的手,像握住一块树根
——母亲啊,您把生命的绿荫给了家
而把枯萎的结局留给自己
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William Zhou周道模
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Joined: 10 Jun 2007
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Location: 中国四川广汉
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PostPosted: 2014-03-06 09:02:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

叙述抒情,质朴真挚。语言怎样更有诗味值得探索。
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