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七律•梦回童年

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2014-02-24 18:10:14 Post subject: 七律•梦回童年

七律•梦回童年桃花正午风香近，梦里依稀紫燕回。天外鸣声新世纪，尘中绘影旧亭台。垂杨不系炊烟醒，忆马狂奔阡陌开。青草犁耙牛上阵，儿童送饭酒一杯。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-02-25 00:20:28 Post subject:

垂杨不系炊烟醒，忆马狂奔阡陌开。童年乃人生最美好的回忆。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2014-02-26 04:10:38 Post subject:

垂杨不系炊烟醒，忆马狂奔阡陌开。——很独特的体验。尤其上联！赏学！

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Posted: 2014-02-26 18:39:47 Post subject:

谢谢两位提读。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

冷雨
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Posted: 2014-03-01 19:22:36 Post subject:

问好诗友！

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