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李拜天
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PostPosted: 2014-02-15 11:04:43    Post subject: 新作4首 Reply with quote

◎ 一个货车司机的忧伤





一辆货车在黄泉路上飞奔
阴谋尘土和俗事被抛向身后
化作满山遍野的油菜和绿色
不知何时会爆的劣质历史
车轮 跑过一大截春天
鬼门关到了,司机交了144块过路费
继续前行,接着又交了44块过桥费通过奈何桥……
再历经罚款偷盗抢劫数次浩劫
天灾人祸 车毁人亡无数磨难
终于把满满一车毒药安全送到了地府
阎王笑了,司机高兴地接过血汗钱
却怎么也笑不出来



◎ 梦里故乡




梦里的故乡总是很美
庄稼站在田野描绘未来
鸡鸭登上墙头放声歌唱
夕阳夕下
牵挂在爹娘的额头等着儿子从远方归来
多么温暖的北中原啊
谁愿意从梦里醒来?

梦里的故乡总是太好
小河流淌着回忆
池塘装满了惦记
早上醒来
一缕一缕亲情从窗外飘来
多么温馨的时刻啊
谁愿意从童年离开?

最近,我经常盯着地图发呆
要是封丘真的这么近就好了
我就不用担心通往幸福的车票那么快卖光
要是淳于真的就在地图里就好了
我就可以天天躺在故乡睡觉
不用再看异乡的烟花描绘虚无缥缈的夜空




◎二月十二日,从巴中回德阳

我沉浸在
被春天染绿的山谷和丘陵
密林和草丛 不能自拔
窗外恬静的风光
搅动着匆匆行程的心思
我彻底迷失在这久违的怡悦里
夕阳夕下的川东大地
一条羊肠小道正走向灵魂深处
再往前,一座白房子躲在树影下隐居
我与她对视的时候
高速路颠簸了一两下,此时
晚霞不停地丈量着太阳的高度
而同事们用睡眠缩短着漫长的旅途



◎ 元宵节德阳观灯


我抵达玄珠湖时,一盏花灯
和一支玫瑰,正躲在公园角落里窃窃私语
这对十九年没见的情侣太投入了
以致于万马奔腾的气势
如织游人的喧闹,丝毫没有影响他们的谈兴
我羡慕,但我只有一个人看灯的福气
冒着或有或无的雨丝
在一处四面环山的陌生领域
看一片开错季节的荷花
春风如真似幻,奔跑或飞翔
虽假犹真
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chenrunmin
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PostPosted: 2014-02-15 19:58:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

在一处四面环山的陌生领域
看一片开错季节的荷花
春风如真似幻,奔跑或飞翔
虽假犹真
祝马年快乐幸福。首复,问好。
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hepingdao
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PostPosted: 2014-02-16 03:00:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

一些故事,心情,场景,较生动,我更喜欢最后一个
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李拜天
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PostPosted: 2014-02-17 16:26:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好chenrunmin,马年快乐!
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李拜天
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PostPosted: 2014-02-17 16:27:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好hepingdao,谢谢你的喜欢,多交流
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沙漠
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Joined: 26 Jan 2007
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Location: 中国温州
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PostPosted: 2014-02-17 19:42:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

血淋淋的刻画,《一个货车司机的忧伤》莫过于此。欣赏
也最喜欢最后一个
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李拜天
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PostPosted: 2014-02-18 08:12:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好沙漠
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安红红
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PostPosted: 2014-02-18 09:01:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

从巴中回德阳,旅途中行色匆匆,他人的生活常物却是我们眼里的美景,因为在他乡,在别处,因为距离。行走的意义也是让世界行走。
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宝塔山人
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PostPosted: 2014-02-18 11:38:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

你的诗里面,怎么有这么多磁铁?把我从很远的地方吸过来,牢牢黏住,几乎无法走开了!
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李拜天
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PostPosted: 2014-02-19 16:01:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好宝塔山人,多交流
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宝塔山人
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PostPosted: 2014-02-23 17:15:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

很欣赏李拜天的诗,愿与君多交流的!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-24 14:52:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言很美 反讽的意味很浓
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李拜天
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PostPosted: 2014-02-25 10:12:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

宝塔山人好,欢迎多交流探讨,我博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/lbtian
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李永超
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PostPosted: 2014-02-25 23:06:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

赏读学习,问好老师!
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李拜天
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PostPosted: 2014-03-03 12:37:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好本家永超,多交流!
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