宁家珍
秀才
Joined: 20 May 2009
Posts: 470
Location: 中国黄山
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 Posted: 2014-02-23 15:12:17 Post subject: 五律 早春即吟 |
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五律 早春即吟 （平水韵）
宁家珍
春来雨水绵，滴滴润桑田。
斑竹初芽嫩，青松针叶鲜。
鸣禽闲树上，吠犬闹江边。
老少皆勤奋，祥和又一年。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2014-02-23 23:52:35 Post subject: |
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鸣禽闲树上，吠犬闹江边。好联！
全诗充满早春气息。
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2014-02-24 06:19:38 Post subject: |
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| 江南春光早 |
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秋叶
秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007
Posts: 769
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| Posted: 2014-02-24 08:10:52 Post subject: |
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| 宁家珍 wrote: |
五律 早春即吟 （平水韵）
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一派早春清新意境，妙！ |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2014-02-26 03:58:37 Post subject: |
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斑竹初芽嫩，青松针叶鲜。
鸣禽闲树上，吠犬闹江边。
好联好对。喜这练字炼意的功夫！ |
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晓松
举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007
Posts: 1192
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| Posted: 2014-03-02 10:24:25 Post subject: |
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| 诗友的诗，渐入佳境也！ |
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笑聊
探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010
Posts: 3448
Location: 中国江苏无锡
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| Posted: 2014-03-04 16:20:14 Post subject: |
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| 好诗！问候家珍诗友。 |
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