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五律--六十初度之四

笑聊
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Posted: 2014-02-02 20:30:39 Post subject: 五律--六十初度之四

梁溪散人时光如过隙，天命已成因。岁月催余老，山河逐日新。花开兰麝郁，霞映水波粼。我意随心处，夕阳凝目人。

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Posted: 2014-02-02 23:13:06 Post subject:

笑聊心境佳，更上一层楼！再次祝贺！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2014-02-03 06:14:37 Post subject:

祝贺笑聊兄！

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Posted: 2014-02-06 10:27:22 Post subject:

笑聊兄之心态和精神，皆与时俱进也。

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Posted: 2014-02-17 12:02:45 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

梁溪散人

时光如过隙，天命已成因。
岁月催余老，山河逐日新。
花开兰麝郁，霞映水波粼。
我意随心处，夕阳凝目人。
...

岁月催余老，山河逐日新。

Laughing

好美！这美，绝不止于技巧层面上的对仗工稳...
祝贺并问候笑斑！

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Posted: 2014-02-17 19:36:53 Post subject:

问好兄长！新年快乐！

笑聊
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Posted: 2014-02-22 16:46:32 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

笑聊心境佳，更上一层楼！再次祝贺！

问候黄老！
谢谢黄老点评鼓励！一直在忙出书之事，故迟复致歉！

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Posted: 2014-02-22 16:47:33 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

祝贺笑聊兄！

谢谢庆宏兄！

忙于出书事，迟复致歉！

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Posted: 2014-02-22 16:49:07 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

笑聊兄之心态和精神，皆与时俱进也。

问好！

谢谢晓松兄点评鼓励！俗事缠身，迟复致歉！

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Posted: 2014-02-22 16:50:56 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

梁溪散人

时光如过隙，天命已成因。
岁月催余老，山河逐日新。
花开兰麝郁，霞映水波粼。
我意随心处，夕阳凝目人。
...

岁月催余老，山河逐日新。
...

问候冰清老师！
谢谢老师赞誉鼓励！一直忙于出书俗事，迟复致歉！

笑聊
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Posted: 2014-02-22 16:52:46 Post subject:

冷雨 wrote:

问好兄长！新年快乐！

谢谢冷雨朋友，新年快乐！

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Posted: 2014-02-24 08:05:15 Post subject:

岁月催余老，山河逐日新。花开兰麝郁，霞映水波粼。好联，学习了。

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Posted: 2014-03-04 16:14:32 Post subject:

[quote="秋叶"]岁月催余老，山河逐日新。花开兰麝郁，霞映水波粼。好联，学习了。[/quote 问好秋叶兄！谢谢鼓励！

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