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从军行七首(新韵)
朱思丞
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PostPosted: 2014-02-08 18:48:52    Post subject: 从军行七首(新韵) Reply with quote

拉练途中
月寂风摧雪影凝,寒枝又裹几层冰。
鲲鹏但举垂天翼,笑慰天山莫与惊。

题宿营地
白山黑水芜荒远,自有豪情彻九天。
一曲军歌犹未住,谁邀新月帐门前?

题训练场
大道通天浩气铺,练兵场上绘英图。
神州但有风云起,血溅沙场谓丈夫!

出征
黄云朔漠映苍山,壮士高歌黑水前。
身随战旗飞瀚海,一轮红日胆肝间。

站岗
乌垒平沙塞外风,谁言哨所影零丁?
抬头一望边关月,万里河山尽览中。

演习
晓驾烈风残雪扬,铁流蹙日势何狂。
旆旌卷地杀声起,又见当年古战场。

行军
石裂霜惊神鬼灭,月高山险龛岩趄。
天寒地闭论风流,唯见红旗千里雪。

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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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PostPosted: 2014-02-08 22:47:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

从军历练,尽显军威。祝新春好!
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Daxia
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Joined: 26 Apr 2013
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Location: Mississauga, Canada
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PostPosted: 2014-02-09 04:04:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

尽显军魂,军威!愚兄经历过工农商学,唯缺兵。人生总要留点遗憾啊。祝老乡新春快乐!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-09 06:25:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

柳营春试马
虎帐夜谈兵

现代军营,塞外雄风
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晓松
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PostPosted: 2014-02-12 13:09:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

大道通天浩气铺,练兵场上绘英图。英武!
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冰清
同进士出身


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PostPosted: 2014-02-15 08:45:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

塞外风情,珍贵的精神财富!
问候新朋友。
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朱思丞
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PostPosted: 2014-02-16 16:39:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢几位老师的嘉赏!愿多指点
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