白凡 童生

Joined: 06 Feb 2014 Posts: 36 Location: 中国安徽 白凡Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-06 12:36:46 Post subject: 凝 眸 |
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默默地凝眸
纷乱了我的心思
在这波涛汹涌的岸边
我一千次遥望
也无法将你的心思望穿
以后的故事里
只有无法表述的咏叹
唇边常常念叨一个阳刚的名字
耳边常常响起你浑厚的声音
我那泪水浸湿的诗行
如这梅子黄时雨
悠长而又缠绵
当我们再次相会
你额上新月般的光辉
照亮我湿漉漉的季节
于是那一缕恋情
如桃花般张开美丽
积攒很久的相思
缤纷成七彩斑斓 _________________ 玫瑰诗人 |
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白凡 童生

Joined: 06 Feb 2014 Posts: 36 Location: 中国安徽 白凡Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-06 12:37:26 Post subject: |
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新来的,请各位老师多多关照! _________________ 玫瑰诗人 |
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游戏诗歌 秀才
Joined: 21 Jun 2006 Posts: 618 Location: 吉林省和龙市华林路64-12-1号 游戏诗歌Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-06 19:34:45 Post subject: |
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情诗
我一千次遥望
也无法将你的心思望穿
你的梦
你额上新月般的光辉
照亮我湿漉漉的季节
于是那一缕恋情
如桃花般张开美丽
积攒很久的相思
缤纷成七彩斑斓
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-06 20:51:09 Post subject: |
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细腻的心意直抒
欢迎新朋友 |
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山城子 榜眼
Joined: 23 May 2007 Posts: 4771 Location: 中国贵州 山城子Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-10 11:15:39 Post subject: |
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学习张老师的作品!! _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。 |
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白凡 童生

Joined: 06 Feb 2014 Posts: 36 Location: 中国安徽 白凡Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-11 14:48:57 Post subject: |
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谢谢老师!祝新春好! _________________ 玫瑰诗人 |
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白凡 童生

Joined: 06 Feb 2014 Posts: 36 Location: 中国安徽 白凡Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-11 14:50:18 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
细腻的心意直抒
欢迎新朋友 |
谢谢白水老师!请多多指教! _________________ 玫瑰诗人 |
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白凡 童生

Joined: 06 Feb 2014 Posts: 36 Location: 中国安徽 白凡Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-11 14:51:37 Post subject: |
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谢谢山城子老师!请多多指教! _________________ 玫瑰诗人 |
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成都尤佳 童生
Joined: 09 Feb 2014 Posts: 15 Location: 中国成都 成都尤佳Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-13 01:24:44 Post subject: |
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美丽的情诗!赞赏! _________________ 医生治病,诗歌疗心! |
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冷雨 秀才
Joined: 05 Nov 2010 Posts: 439
冷雨Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-17 19:58:58 Post subject: |
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问好诗友!学习了! |
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沙漠 秀才
Joined: 26 Jan 2007 Posts: 977 Location: 中国温州 沙漠Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-17 20:04:22 Post subject: |
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纯净的抒情! _________________ 个人博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1056295180 |
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白凡 童生

Joined: 06 Feb 2014 Posts: 36 Location: 中国安徽 白凡Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-19 15:34:27 Post subject: |
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谢谢成都尤佳老师! _________________ 玫瑰诗人 |
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白凡 童生

Joined: 06 Feb 2014 Posts: 36 Location: 中国安徽 白凡Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-19 15:35:20 Post subject: |
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谢谢冷雨老师! _________________ 玫瑰诗人 |
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李永超 童生
Joined: 30 Dec 2013 Posts: 22 Location: 中国云南 李永超Collection |
Posted: 2014-02-25 23:09:23 Post subject: |
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情感真挚的一首,赏读学习! _________________ 云南李永超http://blog.sina.com.cn/liyongchaodeboke |
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