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凝 眸
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PostPosted: 2014-02-06 12:36:46    Post subject: 凝 眸 Reply with quote

默默地凝眸
纷乱了我的心思
在这波涛汹涌的岸边
我一千次遥望
也无法将你的心思望穿
以后的故事里
只有无法表述的咏叹
唇边常常念叨一个阳刚的名字
耳边常常响起你浑厚的声音
我那泪水浸湿的诗行
如这梅子黄时雨
悠长而又缠绵
当我们再次相会
你额上新月般的光辉
照亮我湿漉漉的季节
于是那一缕恋情
如桃花般张开美丽
积攒很久的相思
缤纷成七彩斑斓
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PostPosted: 2014-02-06 12:37:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

新来的,请各位老师多多关照!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-06 19:34:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

情诗

我一千次遥望
也无法将你的心思望穿

你的梦
你额上新月般的光辉
照亮我湿漉漉的季节
于是那一缕恋情
如桃花般张开美丽
积攒很久的相思
缤纷成七彩斑斓

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PostPosted: 2014-02-06 20:51:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

细腻的心意直抒
欢迎新朋友
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PostPosted: 2014-02-10 11:15:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习张老师的作品!!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-11 14:48:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

游戏诗歌 wrote:
情诗
...

谢谢老师!祝新春好!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-11 14:50:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
细腻的心意直抒
欢迎新朋友

谢谢白水老师!请多多指教!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-11 14:51:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
学习张老师的作品!!

谢谢山城子老师!请多多指教!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-13 01:24:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

美丽的情诗!赞赏!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-17 19:58:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好诗友!学习了!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-17 20:04:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

纯净的抒情!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-19 15:34:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

成都尤佳 wrote:
美丽的情诗!赞赏!

谢谢成都尤佳老师!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-19 15:35:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

冷雨 wrote:
问好诗友!学习了!

谢谢冷雨老师!
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PostPosted: 2014-02-25 23:09:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

情感真挚的一首,赏读学习!
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