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冰雪之舞
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PostPosted: 2014-02-09 04:41:13    Post subject: 冰雪之舞 Reply with quote

来过,又了无痕迹


1、
满树开的真是花嘛
清水碧波的温软在花瓣之间轻轻含着

好日子在键盘之间
敲得有些散乱了,来

跳个舞吧
白色未必就不是火焰,惟有脱胎于水的鲜花
才开得这般柔若无骨

哦,我已经过了
痴痴盯着一朵花看的年纪

这北国的天空呀多冷多孤独
要不给你摘颗星星


2、
一会是清虚
一会是玉盘
我更愿意里面装的是酒
词语在微微发酵
半句沐浴醺醉的夜色
半句踏着乱码的蹄音

听到了嘛
两瓣雪花撞击的声音
有人说那是小情人在窗前剪出的初吻
唯独我知道
只有月光下的雪梅
才会绽放出如此触手可及的心跳
只要你侧耳,蹑脚,悄悄穿过
一层薄薄的发黄的记忆


3、
当千万朵鲜花一样的雪瓣,飘飘洒洒扑面飞来
这需要一棵多大的树呀
同时绽放出数不清的银花
这需要一双多么神奇的手呀
把漫天白云
纸扇一般
撕得纷纷扬扬

这样的一个空间,完全可以被
某个你极爱的人物所填补
几朵梅花
缝补着一件雪白的裘衣

仿佛一滴血
点缀着北国这空旷的雪野
新晴
这空旷的变得更加空旷了

我拿什么来填补你
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PostPosted: 2014-02-09 12:19:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

二十余年未曾看过北国之雪,看到这首,就象亲临一场雪的盛宴,我拿什么来填补你,记忆里始终缺席的冬季。新年好,岛主。
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PostPosted: 2014-02-09 12:49:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

来过,又了无痕迹
仿佛一片溶化的雪花,润物无声
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PostPosted: 2014-02-09 14:02:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
二十余年未曾看过北国之雪,看到这首,就象亲临一场雪的盛宴,我拿什么来填补你,记忆里始终缺席的冬季。新年好,岛主。


感谢安红红,新春快乐

我很久没写诗歌了。刚下了场雪,偶记之
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PostPosted: 2014-02-09 14:03:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
来过,又了无痕迹
仿佛一片溶化的雪花,润物无声


感谢你的鼓励,否则都不知道什么时候才会动笔
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