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戍边曲（三首）

朱思丞
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Posted: 2013-12-03 16:54:18 Post subject: 戍边曲（三首）

查古拉哨所官兵近边无寸草，万里逐云鸿。未睹三春暖，唯知四季风。夜巡随碛月，晨起守长空。闻说边陲苦，夷然一笑中。巡边枯原生白雪，落日界碑前。霜重疏林矮，鸟稀瘠地偏。风收山见马，影过草生烟。枪刺挑寒月，星沉一线天。夜巡路没霜皋冷，山缺见古松。月出石挥剑，夜沉江引弓。秋蓬堪作履，军帽欲遮空。风歇马蹄响，榛荒起塞鸿。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/2538322492

Daxia
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Posted: 2013-12-04 02:58:21 Post subject:

朴实，真切。向守疆卫土的官兵们致敬。 _________________ Daxia

黄洋界
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Posted: 2013-12-04 06:13:23 Post subject:

喜读新的边塞壮歌，欢迎新朋友！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

qinghongh
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Posted: 2013-12-04 09:59:07 Post subject:

新时代塞外曲

朱思丞
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Posted: 2013-12-04 18:48:59 Post subject:

Daxia wrote:

朴实，真切。向守疆卫土的官兵们致敬。

谢先生临帖赏评，愿对指点
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朱思丞
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Posted: 2013-12-04 18:49:40 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

喜读新的边塞壮歌，欢迎新朋友！

谢先生嘉赏，愿多交流
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朱思丞
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Posted: 2013-12-04 18:50:09 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

新时代塞外曲

谢先生，盼多教益
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笑聊
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Posted: 2013-12-05 16:42:56 Post subject:

新塞边诗一组学习了。

朱思丞
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Posted: 2014-01-06 10:42:01 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

新塞边诗一组学习了。

谢先生，又稍作修改，盼多指点
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晓松
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Posted: 2014-01-08 08:08:44 Post subject:

欣赏现代的边塞诗，继续写下去。这是其他人不可取代的。祝好！

朱思丞
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Posted: 2014-02-08 18:44:14 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

欣赏现代的边塞诗，继续写下去。这是其他人不可取代的。祝好！

谢先生。我在边塞工作多年，其中辛苦难以尽言，只想借助这些诗让大家了解戍边的军人。
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