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七律岁末有怀

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-01-16 01:25:54 Post subject: 七律岁末有怀

七律岁末有怀又是一年雪满山寄情万里拥乡关儿时伙伴身皆偻昔日同窗发尽斑墙上青藤增槁骨村边古井漫苍颜山重水复流年过回望长空月一弯 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

冰清
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Posted: 2014-01-16 02:34:24 Post subject:

黄兄好律。让我尝到了凄美的味儿！问候！

qinghongh
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Posted: 2014-01-16 06:18:25 Post subject:

夕阳红，情永在

Daxia
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Posted: 2014-01-16 07:18:23 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

七律岁末有怀
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人老心不老，必有青春活力。黄老的七律让我品出点味道。
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Posted: 2014-01-16 07:29:11 Post subject:

谢谢冰清，庆宏 Diaxia赏阅。问好！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2014-01-30 21:54:52 Post subject:

又是一年雪满山寄情万里拥乡关。襟胸豁达。新春快乐！

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Posted: 2014-01-31 00:15:43 Post subject:

谢晓松赏阅，祝新春快乐！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

白水
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Posted: 2014-01-31 12:00:16 Post subject:

游子情怀，故土万里存于胸襟新春快乐

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-01-31 20:53:01 Post subject:

谢白水赏阅，祝新春快乐！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2014-02-01 07:46:16 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

七律岁末有怀
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又是一年雪满山寄情万里拥乡关
儿时伙伴身皆偻昔日同窗发尽斑
墙上青藤增槁骨村边古井漫苍颜
山重水复流年过回望长空月一弯

黄老师大作催人泪下，拜读了。今年我的回望还没有完成，下面先和一首同韵旧作，望赐教：

七律－回望

送牛迎虎尚天寒，雾浸长河蜀道难。
澹泊功名循佛道，重游故国被贪婪。
才飞上海转珠海，更入云南下海南。
避处江湖尘垢远，人生如梦过烟岚。
2009

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-02-01 10:15:58 Post subject:

秋叶年年回望，祝愿事事有成。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2014-02-02 20:24:49 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

七律岁末有怀
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问候黄老！

读之思之，不禁泪花闪现。感动！

黄洋界
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Posted: 2014-02-02 23:02:58 Post subject:

谢谢笑聊赏阅，祝新春快乐！ _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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