| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 28 Sep 2006
 Posts: 2520
 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都
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				|  Posted: 2007-04-28 18:40:14    Post subject: 捣练子-送春 |   |  
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				| 飞柳絮,又春归,信步闲游醉意回。 书律赋歌哀转句,抚琴舒韵却无悲。
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		| 白水 大学士
 
  
 Joined: 02 Oct 2006
 Posts: 14102
 Location: TORONTO
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				|  Posted: 2007-04-29 06:44:45    Post subject: |   |  
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		| 黄洋界 探花
 
  
 Joined: 23 Mar 2007
 Posts: 3301
 Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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				|  Posted: 2007-04-29 09:04:58    Post subject: 致莹雪 |   |  
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				| 有颂春之意,无伤春之情.欣赏,问好! |  | 
	
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		| kokho 进士出身
 
  
 Joined: 30 Nov 2006
 Posts: 2642
 Location: Singapore
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				|  Posted: 2007-04-29 09:57:23    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 学习 拜读 ;)) 
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 乒乓、摄影、诗歌
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都
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				|  Posted: 2007-04-29 15:29:53    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 前日出去游玩,偶发感慨,回来便写了。谢谢GG关注!  |  | 
	
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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				|  Posted: 2007-04-29 15:31:44    Post subject: Re: 致莹雪 |   |  
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谢谢点评! 
	  | 黄洋界 wrote: |  
	  | 有颂春之意,无伤春之情.欣赏,问好! |  |  | 
	
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		| 莹雪 进士出身
 
 
 Joined: 28 Sep 2006
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				|  Posted: 2007-04-29 15:34:01    Post subject: |   |  
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谢谢! 
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	  | 学习 拜读 ;)) 
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		| 王君明 秀才
 
  
 Joined: 03 Apr 2007
 Posts: 250
 Location: 甘肃天水
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				|  Posted: 2007-05-01 07:01:27    Post subject: |   |  
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				| 拜读! _________________
 虚拟网络 真实生活
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		| 梦飞翁 秀才
 
 
 Joined: 03 May 2007
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				|  Posted: 2007-05-03 06:24:11    Post subject: |   |  
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				| “书律赋歌哀转句,抚琴舒韵却无悲。” 说是“无悲”,实为有悲也!好词!格律也工。赞赏!
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