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今夜斯

博弈
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Posted: 2007-04-28 02:11:53 Post subject: 今夜斯

今夜斯于是人们说诗人恋爱了甚至一个及物动词都能让他兴奋更别谈雨后春笋破地的笙音字典张开双臂他在空山的纸面抚摸一夜薄纱似佛的抿笑里　胖胖露珠如镜有苹果的脸颊对语香烛　盼盼春风　却蛇缠咬飞起的夜风筝香烟袅袅　衣袖在换季的屋檐下如联对偶　如燕剪字　将聊斋幻化成宇精神流淌于时间的璋瓦河我在一隅睁开眼睛　若所以 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

和平岛
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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Location: Victoria, Canada
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Posted: 2007-04-28 06:34:15 Post subject:

感觉博弈的文字能纯净人的思维让人微微一笑 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

韩少君
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Posted: 2007-04-28 15:55:10 Post subject:

另类风格。胖胖露珠如镜我在一隅睁开眼睛　若所以 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

博弈
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Posted: 2007-04-28 17:55:42 Post subject:

谢谢两位光临。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

阿依琼裙
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Joined: 09 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2007-04-28 19:49:51 Post subject:

灵动~~~ 喜欢! _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

kokho
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Posted: 2007-04-29 15:03:39 Post subject: Re: 今夜斯

博弈 wrote:

今夜斯

于是
人们说诗人恋爱了
甚至一个及物动词
都能让他兴奋
更别谈雨后春笋破地的笙音

字典张开双臂
他在空山的纸面抚摸一夜薄纱
似佛的抿笑里　胖胖露珠如镜
有苹果的脸颊对语香烛　盼盼
春风　却蛇缠咬飞起的夜风筝

香烟袅袅　衣袖在换季的屋檐下
如联对偶　如燕剪字　将聊斋幻化成宇
精神流淌于时间的璋瓦河
我在一隅睁开眼睛　若所以

最近在神州　所以诗兴大发　？？

Cool

。
_________________
乒乓、摄影、诗歌

杨海军
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Posted: 2007-04-29 15:40:46 Post subject:

感觉博弈诗人的诗歌意境很好，融入了古诗词的一些东西。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

Lake
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Posted: 2007-04-29 18:00:56 Post subject: Re: 今夜斯

博弈 wrote:

人们说诗人恋爱了
甚至一个及物动词
都能让他兴奋

对极！

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the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

金金
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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2007-04-29 20:21:08 Post subject:

不错读着挺爽 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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