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七律新年感怀

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Posted: 2014-01-07 02:33:33 Post subject: 七律新年感怀

七律新年感怀挥手一别旧岁除，举头抬脚踏新途。天寒地冻时常有，苦乐甘甜在玉壶。喜乐平安金不换，不屑名利与粗俗。劝君更进一杯酒，洒向人间都是福。二零一四年元月六日改于密西沙加，加拿大 _________________ Daxia

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Posted: 2014-01-07 06:41:15 Post subject:

劝君更进一杯酒，洒向人间都是福。祝新年快乐！

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Posted: 2014-01-07 10:06:35 Post subject:

新年有余庆，与君同感怀。建议“七律”换“古体”，因本诗不合七律要求。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2014-01-07 23:41:35 Post subject:

谢庆宏兄赏阅，黄老指正。 _________________ Daxia

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Posted: 2014-01-08 07:35:14 Post subject:

“挥手一别旧岁除，举头抬脚踏新途。 ”有一种健康向上的心态和体态。新年快乐！

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Posted: 2014-01-08 09:51:28 Post subject:

[quote="qinghongh"]劝君更进一杯酒，洒向人间都是福。欣赏佳作，新年快乐！

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Posted: 2014-01-09 03:01:30 Post subject:

谢晓松兄赏阅。 _________________ Daxia

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Posted: 2014-01-09 03:02:58 Post subject:

谢家珍MM赏阅，并祝新年快乐！ _________________ Daxia

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Posted: 2014-01-10 04:41:20 Post subject:

喜乐平安金不换——哈哈，至理名言！问候大侠，送上新年祝福！

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Posted: 2014-01-10 05:19:41 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

喜乐平安金不换——哈哈，至理名言！

问候大侠，送上新年祝福！

谢冰清老师雅赏，也祝您新年愉快！
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