博弈
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 Posted: 2013-12-14 08:19:31 Post subject: tour·ism |
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tour·ism
a shiny tour bus comes in
unload all its passengers
they traverse and scatter
all over the hills
scissor my scene
into pieces and pieces--
suddenly the bus whistles
tourists hurry back into the bus
like leaves on the ground
move on to the next spot
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博弈
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| Posted: 2013-12-15 01:44:49 Post subject: |
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瀏覽·主義
一輛閃亮的大巴闖入
卸下所有的乘客
他們遍走，散落
滿佈在山坡
如剪刀碎了我的風景
片片滴滴 -
突然口哨如風起
遊客趕緊鑽回巴士
像地面上的落葉
準備移動到下一個景點
（早起臨時起譯） 
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Lake
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| Posted: 2013-12-18 03:32:00 Post subject: |
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又一首《断章》？ 
unload - unloads?
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| Posted: 2013-12-18 04:10:23 Post subject: |
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| Lake wrote: |
又一首《断章》？
unload - unloads? |
good catch
or, I should modify it to
unload all passengers! (命令句, 給命令的在此隱藏于幕後）
instead of
unloads all its passengers
unloads is probably more natural.
這個其實談的是 ism.
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