孙继廷 秀才
Joined: 21 Apr 2007 Posts: 115 Location: 吉林四平 孙继廷Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-27 03:46:19 Post subject: 秋 |
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秋
秋风秋雨叩秋窗
秋红残落了断香
四野秋声欧阳悚
半壁秋灯林女伤
未见秋鹤排云上
唯有秋鹭芦中藏
秋虫喞喞秋夜静
不尽秋色自彷徨 |
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晓松 举人
Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
晓松Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-28 12:18:35 Post subject: |
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好才华,写完春,又写秋,欣赏!希望看到更多的题材作品。 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
冰清Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-28 20:44:25 Post subject: |
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有趣,耐读。 |
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孙继廷 秀才
Joined: 21 Apr 2007 Posts: 115 Location: 吉林四平 孙继廷Collection |
Posted: 2007-04-29 04:49:18 Post subject: |
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多谢二位诗人夸奖 |
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金金 进士出身
Joined: 08 Feb 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: 山东济宁 金金Collection |
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王君明 秀才
Joined: 03 Apr 2007 Posts: 250 Location: 甘肃天水 王君明Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-01 06:20:24 Post subject: |
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有回旋叠唱之美。 _________________ 虚拟网络 真实生活 |
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孙继廷 秀才
Joined: 21 Apr 2007 Posts: 115 Location: 吉林四平 孙继廷Collection |
Posted: 2007-05-05 03:16:24 Post subject: |
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谢二位诗人赏读,节日快乐 |
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