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老人这样说

张义和
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Joined: 01 Mar 2013
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张义和Collection

Posted: 2013-11-22 14:19:28 Post subject: 老人这样说

老人这样说我收废品的讲良心的我的秤可以跟上街上卖肉的秤我今年80岁啦童叟无欺去年儿媳跟人私奔倔强的儿子撇下孙子服毒自尽女儿也出了车祸我是个苦命的人我这样劳作我还有没尽完的责任我忙起来会好一些闲下来我也扛不住这些苦闷还是现在日子好啦我有土地收入还有收废品的贴补收废品每斤赚些差价 5分 1毛现在你的废纸给你3毛5分加上瓶子给你整数5元（算啦废品给你啦）那不行我能自食其力的谢谢你不要钱我不收你的东西

山城子
榜眼

Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 4771
Location: 中国贵州
山城子Collection

Posted: 2013-11-29 11:32:08 Post subject:

形象立起来了！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

张义和
童生

Joined: 01 Mar 2013
Posts: 73

张义和Collection

Posted: 2013-11-29 19:47:33 Post subject:

山城子 wrote:

形象立起来了！！

谢谢山版来读。辛苦啦。

William Zhou周道模
探花

Joined: 10 Jun 2007
Posts: 3950
Location: 中国四川广汉
William Zhou周道模Collection

Posted: 2013-12-04 09:20:18 Post subject:

白描的好诗，比那些空洞的玄语好多了！ _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

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