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五律 . 咏荷 （二）
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PostPosted: 2013-10-19 10:54:20    Post subject: 五律 . 咏荷 （二） Reply with quote
五律 . 咏荷 （二）

司马从戎


夏日荷花沁，平湖碧色中。
柔情将入水，韵采恰临空。
洗尽风尘意，吹开锦秀丛。
翩翩多少影，日落始朦胧。
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PostPosted: 2013-11-02 10:16:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
“翩翩多少影，日落始朦胧。 ”

若人若景。欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2013-11-02 19:55:27    Post subject: Reply with quote
洗尽风尘意，吹开锦秀丛。

好！
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PostPosted: 2013-11-23 16:29:46    Post subject: Reply with quote
一无 wrote:
“翩翩多少影，日落始朦胧。 ”

若人若景。欣赏。


谢谢先生雅顾。
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PostPosted: 2013-11-23 16:31:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
qinghongh wrote:
洗尽风尘意，吹开锦秀丛。

好！


多谢版主鼓励。
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