影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2013-11-12 18:49:41 Post subject: 七律•秋月(新韵) |
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七律•秋月(新韵)
霜容略洗凌寒色,独倚栏杆照世尘。
连响蟾宫收寂寞,耐斫桂树葆青春。
晚云心事风中鉴,秋水襟怀天外存。
洗梦精诚纯化雪,明朝片片载冰心。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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Daxia 秀才
Joined: 26 Apr 2013 Posts: 163 Location: Mississauga, Canada DaxiaCollection |
Posted: 2013-11-13 05:07:25 Post subject: |
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七律•秋月(新韵)
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欣赏。 _________________ Daxia |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-11-13 06:45:58 Post subject: |
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晚云心事风中鉴,秋水襟怀天外存。
意境深远。 |
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影沉寒水 举人

Joined: 16 Feb 2010 Posts: 1145 Location: 中国福建 影沉寒水Collection |
Posted: 2013-11-13 18:50:30 Post subject: |
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两位晚上好
谢谢阅读! _________________ 诗无涯。思在线 |
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朱思丞 童生
Joined: 12 Nov 2013 Posts: 53 Location: 江苏南京 朱思丞Collection |
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