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Posted: 2013-10-31 10:34:46 Post subject: 一抹闪电

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Posted: 2013-11-01 05:52:29 Post subject:

前赴后继

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Posted: 2013-11-01 09:35:37 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

前赴后继

如此。

谢谢白水 Moonlight !
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-11-05 08:54:27 Post subject:

欣赏！独特的角度！

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Posted: 2013-11-06 10:23:42 Post subject:

俭秋斋 wrote:

欣赏！独特的角度！

谢谢朋友！
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———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-11-06 10:31:54 Post subject:

在动感之中呈现生活。赏读问候

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Posted: 2013-11-07 09:36:23 Post subject:

萧吾非吾 wrote:

在动感之中呈现生活。赏读问候

谢谢萧吾非吾朋友！问候！
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-11-07 16:01:01 Post subject:

把一件简单的事儿叙述的如此酣畅，高！ _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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Posted: 2013-11-08 09:46:43 Post subject:

远狼 wrote:

把一件简单的事儿叙述的如此酣畅，高！

谢谢远狼朋友！
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

———清张问陶

http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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