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Posted: 2013-10-17 14:17:01 Post subject: 秋风慢

秋风慢文/一品红源于晚开的一丛花朵源于一种守望尤其是梦境一缕风慢慢打开自己的身体，它的美闪在露水上暖暖的疼暖暖的软暖暖的爱意和感动慢在一片青叶迟迟不肯返黄的早晨绵长的气息霜色可爱的姿态更慢的时候是无法言说娇羞不知所以在落叶里走走这样安静的一偶，在落叶里走走速度是次要的或不要。日子走得太快，花朵也是一直往前走。迎面而来的树，打开了一个世界梦幻的表达，翅膀的身世，还有鸟鸣，流水和远处的漂泊那些你爱过的绿叶子，做梦的雨点，春天的呼吸其他的一切都不再重要美人月此刻，有某种渴望只为她静下来，静下来，倾听这是一朵花对另一朵花的喜爱无关风月。我要赶在寒风吹起之前完成那个诺许来自大洋彼岸的问候，素心如水的女子心是宁静的，为匆忙的天空腾出一片云彩与特牛的大雁结伴而行近处有海滩，成群的海鸥划过浪花，带着梦红红的枫叶多么美，这异国的风情我远方的姐妹，月光天使菊香进入秋天，可以碰到久违的西风徘徊的小径穿过一朵菊花的柔软和盛开我不禁想到东篱，那个种菊的人，在南山打开的黄昏这有着伊人气质的暗香这香气里阑珊的灯火，杯盏，清逸的梦境来一阙声声慢，再来一阙长相思草木之心这才是生命原本的样子那些瓦片，陶器，砂砾，尘土的味道从低音区开始一株草有自己的体温，脉动和呼吸这些来自大自然的气息，打开内心纤柔的微妙抵达跳动的真实因为需要桃花，流水一直行在路上。住在秋天隔壁的蒹葭不停地梳理着青丝繁华和荒城都是瞬间的闪电。怀上一颗纯净之心做一个谦卑的人安静地行走，安静地触摸轻轻摇，轻轻吟 _________________ 中国山东，女诗人

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Posted: 2013-10-17 17:28:59 Post subject:

美丽的一组！！学习！！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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Posted: 2013-10-18 07:34:53 Post subject:

从低音区开始一株草有自己的体温，脉动和呼吸这些来自大自然的气息，打开内心纤柔的微妙抵达跳动的真实秋风虽慢，却喜欢这般宁静问好周末

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Posted: 2013-10-19 21:01:35 Post subject:

有着古典的意蕴。读之，想着有着美丽情怀的典雅的你。。。

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Posted: 2013-10-19 22:16:10 Post subject:

慢得好！ _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

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Posted: 2013-10-23 18:06:26 Post subject:

好细致的生活态度~~这才是陌上花落~亦可缓缓归矣~秋水长天尽收眼底~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2013-10-25 09:28:59 Post subject:

“这才是生命原本的样子 ” _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-10-29 15:42:29 Post subject:

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从低音区开始
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渴望着宁静的生活。问好白白，最近你这里的门关的好紧，我就是打不开了。
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Posted: 2013-10-29 15:43:59 Post subject:

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有着古典的意蕴。读之，想着有着美丽情怀的典雅的你。。。

你也梦一样，我会想到如荷的美丽女子
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Posted: 2013-10-29 15:44:39 Post subject:

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美丽的一组！！学习！！

问好山城子老师，向你学习。
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Posted: 2013-10-29 15:45:28 Post subject:

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慢得好！

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Posted: 2013-10-29 15:47:22 Post subject:

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好细致的生活态度~~这才是陌上花落~亦可缓缓归矣~秋水长天尽收眼底~

问好红红。
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Posted: 2013-10-29 15:47:53 Post subject:

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“这才是生命原本的样子 ”

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Posted: 2013-10-30 23:05:13 Post subject:

味道真好...... _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

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Posted: 2013-11-01 07:04:54 Post subject:

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一品红 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

从低音区开始
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渴望着宁静的生活。问好白白，最近你这里的门关的好紧，我就是打不开了。

也许镇守山门的花和尚偶尔打瞌睡了 Wink

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Posted: 2013-11-10 08:37:30 Post subject:

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一品红 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

从低音区开始
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渴望着宁静的生活。问好白白，最近你这里的门关的好紧，我就是打不开了。

也许镇守山门的花和尚偶尔打瞌睡了 Wink

Wink

是的呀，这花和尚总睡觉不开门 Laughing

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Posted: 2013-11-10 09:33:06 Post subject:

民乐名曲有：春江花月夜；你的诗可以连成：秋风叶月菊。

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Posted: 2013-11-21 08:10:00 Post subject:

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民乐名曲有：春江花月夜；你的诗可以连成：秋风叶月菊。 Very Happy

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让你这么一连，挺古韵的。一直上不来，回复晚了。问好。
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Posted: 2013-11-21 10:17:39 Post subject:

一家人来问候。

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