大脚板 童生
Joined: 25 Oct 2013 Posts: 3 Location: 中国重庆 大脚板Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-25 21:46:34 Post subject: 七律·沈园放翁题诗壁 |
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寂寞龙蛇残壁幽,尽书凄婉尽书愁。
一湖春水悲烟重,满苑桃花泣血稠。
孤鹤亭前夕阳照,伤心桥下绿波流。
琴箫合奏《钗头凤》,遗恨千年恸九州。 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-10-26 04:28:06 Post subject: |
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大脚板 wrote: |
寂寞龙蛇残壁幽,尽书凄婉尽书愁。
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好诗,陆游泉下有知可慰矣。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-10-26 05:54:33 Post subject: |
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写出《钗头凤》凄婉情。 |
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笑聊 探花
Joined: 05 Jan 2010 Posts: 3448 Location: 中国江苏无锡 笑聊Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-26 18:46:33 Post subject: |
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好诗!学习。 |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2013-10-27 02:56:59 Post subject: |
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寂寞龙蛇残壁幽,尽书凄婉尽书愁。 欣赏!
欢迎新朋友! |
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一无 秀才

Joined: 20 Mar 2013 Posts: 576 Location: 中国 一无Collection |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2013-11-07 07:31:54 Post subject: |
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寂寞龙蛇残壁幽,尽书凄婉尽书愁。
一湖春水悲烟重,满苑桃花泣血稠。
孤鹤亭前夕阳照,伤心桥下绿波流。
琴箫合奏《钗头凤》,遗恨千年恸九州。
拜读新友好律。
在深沉凄清的意象中,蕴含着强烈的愤懑遗恨之情。很是感人。 |
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