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七律·沈园放翁题诗壁
大脚板
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PostPosted: 2013-10-25 21:46:34    Post subject: 七律·沈园放翁题诗壁 Reply with quote
寂寞龙蛇残壁幽，尽书凄婉尽书愁。
一湖春水悲烟重，满苑桃花泣血稠。
孤鹤亭前夕阳照，伤心桥下绿波流。
琴箫合奏《钗头凤》，遗恨千年恸九州。
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秋叶
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PostPosted: 2013-10-26 04:28:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
大脚板 wrote:
寂寞龙蛇残壁幽，尽书凄婉尽书愁。
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好诗，陆游泉下有知可慰矣。
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PostPosted: 2013-10-26 05:54:33    Post subject: Reply with quote
写出《钗头凤》凄婉情。
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2013-10-26 18:46:33    Post subject: Reply with quote
好诗！学习。
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晓松
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PostPosted: 2013-10-27 02:56:59    Post subject: Reply with quote
寂寞龙蛇残壁幽，尽书凄婉尽书愁。 欣赏！
欢迎新朋友！
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PostPosted: 2013-11-02 09:38:47    Post subject: Reply with quote
欣赏，学习。
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名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。

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冰清
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PostPosted: 2013-11-07 07:31:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
寂寞龙蛇残壁幽，尽书凄婉尽书愁。
一湖春水悲烟重，满苑桃花泣血稠。
孤鹤亭前夕阳照，伤心桥下绿波流。
琴箫合奏《钗头凤》，遗恨千年恸九州。



拜读新友好律。
在深沉凄清的意象中，蕴含着强烈的愤懑遗恨之情。很是感人。
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