司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-10-26 16:18:21 Post subject: 五律 . 咏荷(四) |
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五律 . 咏荷(四)
司马从戎
掠影浮光景,参差碧浪重。
一朝萍水聚,就此死生从。
出落风华韵,凝成落寞容。
荷兮何苦短,来世再相逢。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-10-26 19:37:36 Post subject: |
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由荷写出人生意。好诗! |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-10-31 09:42:32 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
由荷写出人生意。好诗! |
多谢先生鼓励。问好! |
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一无 秀才

Joined: 20 Mar 2013 Posts: 576 Location: 中国 一无Collection |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-11-23 16:33:17 Post subject: |
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一无 wrote: |
“一朝萍水聚,就此死生从。”
万物如此。欣赏。 |
多谢先生鼓励。 |
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