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七古•入秋一页

影沉寒水
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Posted: 2013-10-16 17:50:35 Post subject: 七古•入秋一页

七古•入秋一页迎风沐雨经路违，感端思绪又纷飞。自古空荷近白露，敢用红叶作嫁衣？飘飘四野多行脚，盛世终南涌是非。乘槎泛海叼诗月，原是蓬莱一梦归。 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

晓松
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Posted: 2013-10-21 10:29:47 Post subject:

乘槎泛海，雄心不小，蓬莱一梦，原点回归。幸得沐雨经路违，才使思绪又纷飞。思路较宽，不错！

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Posted: 2013-10-22 06:21:49 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

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尾联甚妙，学习了。

一无
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Posted: 2013-11-06 10:12:46 Post subject:

“乘槎泛海叼诗月，原是蓬莱一梦归。” _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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