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萤火虫

非马
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Posted: 2008-09-17 17:49:00 Post subject: 萤火虫

萤火虫根据科学家们的预测今年夏天的萤火虫会极端稀少甚至绝迹显然他们的电脑又出了毛病今晚这满院子里闪闪烁烁此起彼落的不正是我久违了的老朋友们吗此刻问题不在于该不该根据他们摇摆不定的科学报告再喝它一杯咖啡而是我的眼睛只有这么一双不知该跟随它们照亮的哪一条幽径去寻找我失落多年的宝藏 *这是2008年10月的《每月双语一诗》的华语部分。有兴趣的朋友们请到《非马艺术世界》（http://wmarr9.home.comcast.net/bmz.htm）去读英语部分。 _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

曲元奇
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Posted: 2008-09-17 22:36:12 Post subject:

【而我的眼睛只有这么一双不知该跟随它们照亮的哪一条幽径去寻找我失落多年的宝藏】老师好

秀水
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Joined: 31 May 2008
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Posted: 2008-09-17 22:41:49 Post subject:

结尾尤好.颀赏学习 _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

半溪明月
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Joined: 30 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2008-09-18 17:10:05 Post subject:

结尾处理的好~欣赏问好老师!

非马
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Joined: 22 Jun 2006
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Posted: 2008-09-18 18:34:55 Post subject:

问曲元奇,秀水,半溪明月三位好! 谢谢阅读. _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

白水
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Posted: 2008-09-19 14:37:25 Post subject:

今晚这满院子里闪闪烁烁此起彼落的不正是我久违了的老朋友们吗若临其境

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2008-09-19 16:50:54 Post subject:

是啊，如果没有结尾的新意，整首诗就不会站起来的。问好先生。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

乱弹者是我
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Joined: 05 Oct 2008
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Posted: 2008-10-05 01:57:23 Post subject:

“于今腐草无萤火，终究科学有预测”。竹径通幽处——非马老师的诗就是大手笔，宝藏就在结尾处。

非马
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Posted: 2008-10-05 05:44:17 Post subject:

谢谢白水,杯中冲浪,乱弹三位朋友的阅读。秋天已至，相信你们都有过一个闪亮愉快的夏天。 _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

钓月
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Posted: 2008-10-05 19:05:40 Post subject:

问好！这消息令我震惊！不希望是事实！ _________________ 欲钓那只太阳,却钓了一轮月亮 http://www.hongxiu.com/my.asp?id=1310875 http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanqirong

非马
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Joined: 22 Jun 2006
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Posted: 2008-10-05 19:07:46 Post subject:

钓月 wrote:

问好！
这消息令我震惊！不希望是事实！

已经是过去了的消息,而且不是事实. 问好!
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李运邦
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Posted: 2008-10-06 04:19:19 Post subject:

＂今晚这满院子里闪闪烁烁此起彼落的不正是我久违了的老朋友们吗＂感同身受，围炉夜话！ _________________ 闲处携书花下坐，兴来得句竹间吟！

一无
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Posted: 2013-10-16 09:04:30 Post subject:

沉思。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

俭秋斋
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Posted: 2013-10-22 05:21:26 Post subject: 来学习

欣赏！问候非马老师！

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