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西江月 次韵奉和黄耀俊先生《西江月 留别》
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PostPosted: 2013-10-04 01:41:22    Post subject: 西江月 次韵奉和黄耀俊先生《西江月 留别》 Reply with quote
西江月 次韵奉和黄耀俊先生《西江月 留别》

黄兄回国探亲前夕给我寄来《西江月 留别》。情深意切的，我好生感动。

一别庚兄意气，几番遥望航程。羡君远举耀晖盈。自在无须约定。
不说悠悠离绪，更添落落吟情。此中三昧让人醒。真个诚明虚静。

敬录黄兄《西江月 留别》

梦里怀乡赏月，云中望雁思程。羸身犹自意充盈，准备行囊已定。
故友难言别绪，枫园总赋关情。佳词如酿醉初醒，岁月唱酬不静。
黄耀俊 9，30
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PostPosted: 2013-10-05 09:55:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
令人感动的唱和.不说悠悠离绪，更添落落吟情。祝黄老师回国旅途愉快,等你们归国新作.
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PostPosted: 2013-10-05 11:20:32    Post subject: Reply with quote
欣赏两位老师好诗。黄老师平安，冰清老师保重！
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PostPosted: 2013-10-05 15:44:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
祝冰清老师黄老师安好!
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冰清
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PostPosted: 2013-10-05 21:35:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢白水、晓松、qinghongh！问候大家！

别称老师啊。拜托！
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PostPosted: 2013-10-13 01:14:07    Post subject: Reply with quote
二位老师好词，春树暮云，诗友情深，学习了。
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PostPosted: 2013-10-20 03:26:03    Post subject: Reply with quote
谢谢老班长嘉奖！
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PostPosted: 2013-11-02 09:53:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
唱和雅意。
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