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满天鱼鳞云（组诗）

山城子
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Posted: 2013-10-08 19:22:01 Post subject: 满天鱼鳞云（组诗）

满天鱼鳞云（组诗）文/ 山城子逢场今日逢场，满天鱼鳞云橘、柚、梨、枣、苹果、板栗…当街泛滥泛滥的还有车与人人与人摩臂，车镜抚肩农民都直着腰杆大气地吆喝农副产品秋高气爽的心情洋溢着红光满面曾以蕨菜度荒的地方贫瘠的往事都被他们遗忘成遥远收官收官的是小镇十八层的商家住宅毗邻的六层建筑已经显得太矮仿佛是各家经济实力或势力增长的比较图幻化的箭头或匍匐在地或直插九霄云外没有收官的是附近的高铁与高速还有一米一万元人民币的河道“扩改” 真个“龙盘虎踞今胜昔”了 “莺歌燕舞”老毛你那时唱得不够实在卖鱼尽管黔中远离大海海里的带鱼黄花鱼…却常年的天天有卖老伴儿问多少钱一斤答说一斤只卖十二块一抬头姑娘忽然笑着改了口说给你老拣两条去吧还买什么买原来是寨子里熟人的女儿就这话，传达出的朴实多么令人感慨 2013-10-6于夏云镇 _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
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Posted: 2013-10-16 22:41:53 Post subject:

提上来！ _________________ 诗是人生的雅伴儿。

一无
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Joined: 20 Mar 2013
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Posted: 2013-10-17 10:17:02 Post subject:

哈，靠海近的地方带鱼要二十来元一斤呢！ _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

山城子
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Posted: 2013-10-17 17:30:10 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

哈，靠海近的地方带鱼要二十来元一斤呢！

可能质量更好！
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白水
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Posted: 2013-10-18 07:29:37 Post subject:

谢谢老师分享，让我更多的看到故国的今天。问好周末

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2013-10-19 09:18:31 Post subject:

山老师诗歌叙述生活。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

荷梦
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Posted: 2013-10-19 21:00:19 Post subject:

曾以蕨菜度荒的地方贫瘠的往事都被他们遗忘成遥远》翻天覆地。。

远狼
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Posted: 2013-10-19 22:18:48 Post subject:

生活，诗歌！ _________________ __________________________ 诗书短文章，潦草乃为狂。管他载道否，吾趣吾自张。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/huolu9

山城子
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Posted: 2013-10-22 14:37:00 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

曾以蕨菜度荒的地方
贫瘠的往事都被他们遗忘成遥远
》翻天覆地。。

谢谢朋友来阅！！
_________________
诗是人生的雅伴儿。

山城子
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Joined: 23 May 2007
Posts: 4771
Location: 中国贵州
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Posted: 2013-10-22 14:37:17 Post subject:

荷梦 wrote:

曾以蕨菜度荒的地方
贫瘠的往事都被他们遗忘成遥远
》翻天覆地。。

谢谢朋友来阅！！
_________________
诗是人生的雅伴儿。

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