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石榴花开(组诗)
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PostPosted: 2008-06-17 21:06:56    Post subject: 石榴花开(组诗) Reply with quote

石榴花开(组诗)
文/ 山城子

小序:
欲将近期欣慰诉之远方,铺笺握笔,竹筒倒豆般稀啦哗啦出来,那是信件。
选一应时之物,借物或拟或喻,言说AB——明说A,暗说B,罩一层透明素纱,含蓄又明白,舒袖飘带而行,环佩叮咚有韵,就应当是诗歌了。
今借窗外石榴正红,念及燕北学子,欣吟《石榴花开》一组,寄情以达——与“和煦的阳吻”诗社同学共享之。

● 初 见

遥远的小城古朴着现代
就像冥冥中邂逅你们
郊外

一株株的石榴树
一树树的明艳
仿佛前世的等待

听过“燕山夜话”吗
那个喧嚣黯淡了的时代


● 贴 近

一轮夕阳不好意思贴近
在远山红着脸
也曾走过带露的青春
轮回还等在天边

驻足端详
殷红有别
一朵朵的渴望开始燃烧
蜂蝶翩然枝间


● 私 语

与花儿们的交流悄悄进行

蕊柱儿上的词语
天光落颜
叶瓣儿上的修辞
任风剪裁

露珠晶莹
似泪未落
只微微滚动着美丽情怀


● 向 往

是不是向往蒂落的时节
硕大的果实清香
满腹的粒粒鲜润
酸酸甜甜都是心灵的储藏

与中秋的月饼举案欣慰
共月色来赏来尝
那时我的目光
仍会遥远地张望

2008-8-18于黔中文化村
(561104 贵州省平坝县红湖学校退休教师 李德贵)
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PostPosted: 2013-10-17 10:22:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

“一轮夕阳不好意思贴近
在远山红着脸
也曾走过带露的青春
轮回还等在天边

驻足端详
殷红有别
一朵朵的渴望开始燃烧
蜂蝶翩然枝间 ”

很有意境的歌。


想不到,08年的帖子,我还坐了沙发。

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PostPosted: 2013-10-17 14:19:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

甜甜的石榴,美丽的语言。
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PostPosted: 2013-10-17 17:25:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

五年前的帖子了,哈哈被你提上来!!谢谢了!!
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PostPosted: 2013-10-17 17:26:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

一品红 wrote:
甜甜的石榴,美丽的语言。


谢谢一品红!!
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