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七绝中秋

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Posted: 2013-10-03 07:27:48 Post subject: 七绝中秋

七绝中秋 -----兼和寒水兄秋高明月似金杯，天上人间醉一回。满目群星邀旧友，长风轻奏彩云归。 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 影沉寒水原玉：七绝•中秋满目风尘兼逆旅，时光镶愿暂停留。捧杯天上邀明月，共饮乡思到仲秋。古绝•凤凰山游（词韵）凤凰山上凤凰池，凤凰池水绿如迷。凤凰沐浴曾千载，凤凰一去不复回。

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Posted: 2013-10-03 08:30:46 Post subject:

回国感觉怎样？祝好

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Posted: 2013-10-03 09:00:50 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

回国感觉怎样？祝好

谢谢！恍如穿越时空。

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Posted: 2013-10-03 09:28:50 Post subject:

是，国内变化很大。黄老师也回去了，说不定你们可以一起去再品成都小吃嫉妒

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Posted: 2013-10-03 11:17:58 Post subject:

拜读，真是绝了。

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Posted: 2013-10-03 20:49:05 Post subject:

莹雪 wrote:

拜读，真是绝了。

谢谢莹雪MM雅赏。

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Posted: 2013-10-03 20:50:04 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

是，国内变化很大。
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肠胃不大，美食不少。

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Posted: 2013-10-04 01:30:46 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

回国感觉怎样？祝好

谢谢！恍如穿越时空。

哈哈，这种感受可是篇大文章！

静待佳作！问候。

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Posted: 2013-10-06 11:44:42 Post subject:

谢谢冰清老师赏读！

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Posted: 2013-10-07 09:26:55 Post subject:

盼庆宏兄多发一些家乡的消息。

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Posted: 2013-10-13 00:54:25 Post subject:

满目群星邀旧友，长风轻奏彩云归。庆宏兄，这也是你荣归故里的感受吧，祝愉快！

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Posted: 2013-10-13 13:05:09 Post subject:

晓松 wrote:

盼庆宏兄多发一些家乡的消息。

时过境迁，沧海桑田。故乡的变化让人眼花缭乱。

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Posted: 2013-10-13 13:07:53 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

满目群星邀旧友，长风轻奏彩云归。
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谢谢秋叶兄！《彩云归》是首电视剧的插曲，词曲都很优美。

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Posted: 2013-11-06 10:14:32 Post subject:

“秋高明月似金杯，天上人间醉一回。” 欣赏。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-11-06 11:17:36 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

“秋高明月似金杯，天上人间醉一回。”
欣赏。

谢谢一无诗友！

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