司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-07-26 20:29:03 Post subject: 五律 . 咏菊 |
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五律 . 咏菊
司马从戎
待到百花谢,黄华满目葱。
傲霜何凛烈,怜雨总由衷。
洁是卉乡魄,刚为诗里雄。
纵然抱香死,不落北风中。 |
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秋叶 秀才
Joined: 17 Feb 2007 Posts: 769
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Posted: 2013-09-19 02:17:24 Post subject: |
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佳作,和一首同题旧作;
七绝-秋菊
秋风秋雨渐秋凉, 绽放新蕾染晚霜。
不共蔷薇争艳丽, 静留篱下自幽香。 |
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冰清 同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007 Posts: 1921
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Posted: 2013-10-05 21:45:19 Post subject: |
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高咏!赏读。
欢迎新友  |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2013-10-06 11:42:26 Post subject: |
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欣赏! |
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莹雪 进士出身
Joined: 28 Sep 2006 Posts: 2520 Location: 中国-辽宁·三燕故都 莹雪Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-09 11:17:12 Post subject: |
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欣赏! |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
司马从戎Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-14 09:12:28 Post subject: |
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秋叶 wrote: |
佳作,和一首同题旧作;
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大作拜读。谢谢! |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
司马从戎Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-14 09:13:37 Post subject: |
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冰清 wrote: |
高咏!赏读。
欢迎新友 :lol: |
多谢先生鼓励! |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
司马从戎Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-14 09:14:39 Post subject: |
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多谢先生鼓励! |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
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Posted: 2013-10-14 09:15:40 Post subject: |
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多谢先生鼓励! |
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晓松 举人

Joined: 26 Feb 2007 Posts: 1192
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Posted: 2013-10-21 10:17:02 Post subject: |
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纵然抱香死,不落北风中。有个性,不错! |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
司马从戎Collection |
Posted: 2013-10-31 09:44:15 Post subject: |
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晓松 wrote: |
纵然抱香死,不落北风中。有个性,不错! |
多谢先生鼓励! |
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一无 秀才

Joined: 20 Mar 2013 Posts: 576 Location: 中国 一无Collection |
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司马从戎 童生
Joined: 10 Jul 2013 Posts: 57
司马从戎Collection |
Posted: 2013-11-23 16:36:33 Post subject: |
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多谢先生雅顾。 |
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