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五古五首 游加拿大海洋三省拾零
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PostPosted: 2013-08-25 05:29:35    Post subject: 五古五首 游加拿大海洋三省拾零 Reply with quote

五古五首 游加拿大海洋三省拾零

一 乘船观鲸
魁北克省狼河市接近圣罗伦斯河口处乘船观鲸,该处是世界上
观赏鲸鱼在水中嬉戏和觅食最好的地方之一。

白浪凌云起 长鲸戏水时
翻腾身矫健 浪里弄奇姿

二 享用龙虾
于加国最小的省份爱德华王子岛享用驰名于世的龙虾晚宴,让人
大享口福。

慕名王子岛 享用大龙虾
盛宴人人赞 持鳌兴味佳

三 游览盖桥
游纽宾士省著名的号称世界最长(1282英尺)的盖桥,盖桥實
为廊桥,全为木结构,已历经百年沧桑。据导游介绍,有一对恋人乘马车过桥,走到桥中时,马止步不前,此时车夫要这对恋人
互相热吻,而且要响,马才肯继续前行,果然如愿。

风雪廊桥路 踟蹰马不前
情人相热吻 快马过前川

四 邂逅独行者
旅途中邂逅一位年轻白人,他随身携带简单的行囊,虽然风尘仆仆,然而神采飞扬,令人钦慕。

一路风霜染 无家处处家
爱犬随作伴 快意走天涯

五 好望角观潮
于纽宾士省位于芬地湾的好望角观潮,其潮水涨退落差为
世界之最。

观潮何处好 是处有奇观
转瞬洪波起 忽而不见滩
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PostPosted: 2013-08-25 08:02:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老兄海洋之旅,欢快,惬意。五首佳作,形象,生动。
我试着把它归在一起,变成古风一首。Laughing

五古 游加拿大海洋三省拾零

白浪凌云起 长鲸戏水时
翻腾身矫健 浪里弄奇姿
慕名王子岛 享用大龙虾
盛宴人人赞 持鳌兴味佳
风雪廊桥路 踟蹰马不前
亲人相热吻 快马过前川
一路风霜染 无家处处家
爱犬随作伴 快意走天涯
观潮何处好 是处有奇观
转瞬洪波起 忽而不见滩
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PostPosted: 2013-08-25 08:48:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

随黄老师的大作也游历加东一番.
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PostPosted: 2013-08-26 06:53:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢晓松美意尽归纳之功,谢谢庆宏赏阅。
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PostPosted: 2013-08-26 09:05:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

“一路风霜染 无家处处家
爱犬随作伴 快意走天涯 ”

爱在天涯。
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PostPosted: 2013-08-26 22:54:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

“无家处处家”“快意走天涯” 欣赏,学习了。
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PostPosted: 2013-08-27 05:19:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢一无,Daxia赏阅!
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PostPosted: 2013-09-19 02:09:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄老师晓松兄描写加东风貌甚妙, 以前我也去过,可惜没有什么习作分享。 二位中秋快乐!
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PostPosted: 2013-09-19 05:26:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢秋叶,祝中秋节阖家快乐!
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PostPosted: 2013-09-21 07:18:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

读黄老诗作,犹如亲历。顺致佳节快乐!迟复,出游在外。
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PostPosted: 2013-09-21 09:17:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢笑聊兄赏阅,并致问候!
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PostPosted: 2013-10-03 08:33:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好黄老师,祝回国旅途安好。
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PostPosted: 2013-10-04 01:08:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄兄,首首都有情趣!

2005年夏,我也去过。的确有特殊的风味!

回国几天,时差倒过来吗?保重。
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