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中秋桐溪律、绝各一

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Posted: 2013-09-21 06:56:51 Post subject: 中秋桐溪律、绝各一

文/梁溪散人（一）桐溪夜色静中闹，两岸灯光七彩妍。汩汩水声鱼共乐，悠悠诗颂赋连篇。彷徨月影原因有，起落心潮结果怜？淳朴民风今可悟，朗吟遗产对歌前。（二）灯光闪烁氛围幻，两岸人群潮涌来。溪水游鱼安自乐？歌声舞蹈尽其才。

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Posted: 2013-09-21 07:25:31 Post subject:

桐溪（位于福鼎市中心，是休闲娱乐的好去处）溪流中，锦鲤尽情的玩水；溪两岸中秋热闹非凡，七彩灯光把夜幕点缀的梦幻多变，这里有健身的，那里有跳舞的；呵，前边有对歌的，河对岸有吟诵桐诗的（相当于诗词的吟唱）、、、、、、

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Posted: 2013-09-22 04:13:15 Post subject:

桐溪民风淳，人乐鱼亦乐。 _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2013-09-22 05:25:09 Post subject:

如闻其声，如临其景。

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Posted: 2013-09-22 20:14:44 Post subject:

汩与汨不同哦 _________________ 诗无涯。思在线

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Posted: 2013-09-22 21:03:31 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

桐溪民风淳，人乐鱼亦乐。

谢谢黄老师赏读点评！问好。

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Posted: 2013-09-22 21:04:24 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

如闻其声，如临其景。

谢谢庆宏兄赏读点评鼓励！问好。

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Posted: 2013-09-22 21:08:36 Post subject:

影沉寒水 wrote:

汩与汨不同哦

寒水兄说得对，汩与汨确实不同，前者读故上声，后者读觅去声。

谢谢指正！

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Posted: 2013-09-23 05:52:23 Post subject:

笑聊 wrote:

文/梁溪散人
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大作写出美丽意境，有空回去定去看看。

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Posted: 2013-09-23 06:08:53 Post subject:

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文/梁溪散人
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还是国内热闹啊！
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Posted: 2013-10-02 19:24:18 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

文/梁溪散人
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大作写出美丽意境，有空回去定去看看。

问好秋叶兄！出去了一段时间，迟复致歉！

秋叶兄是那里的人？

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Posted: 2013-10-02 20:01:47 Post subject:

Daxia wrote:

笑聊 wrote:

文/梁溪散人
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还是国内热闹啊！

问好DAXia先生!出去几日，迟复致歉！

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Posted: 2013-10-03 08:34:39 Post subject:

如临其境，谢谢分享

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Posted: 2013-10-04 01:18:10 Post subject:

彷徨月影，起落心潮，很美的！ “结果怜？”，好像不太好理解。问候笑聊君。国庆长假快乐！

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Posted: 2013-10-26 18:19:47 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

如临其境，谢谢分享

谢谢白水兄赏读点评！

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Posted: 2013-10-26 18:24:16 Post subject:

冰清 wrote:

彷徨月影，起落心潮，很美的！
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问好冰清老师！好久没来了（一直在准备下一本书的筹备）。

结果怜，确实使人不解，但也是有原因的，不便讲。

谢谢冰清老师点评！

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Posted: 2013-11-02 09:41:14 Post subject:

“汩汩水声鱼共乐，悠悠诗颂赋连篇。” 欣赏。 _________________ 名心退尽道心生，如梦如仙句偶成。天籁自鸣天趣足，好诗不过近人情。 ———清张问陶 http://www.yizitong.org/weblog.php?w=397

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Posted: 2013-11-02 18:55:09 Post subject:

一无 wrote:

“汩汩水声鱼共乐，悠悠诗颂赋连篇。”

欣赏。

谢谢一无朋友赏读鼓励！

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